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Pip! Hola! Over here! (Waves hand in air frantically)
I would very much appreciate it if you could review this for me:

The Monster Under My Bed
This is Part One of Two.
I may need you to review Part Two once I get it up. :D
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Thanks for the review again Pip sir!

I think this is the last chapter I'll ask you to review to, until I get the general idea sorted out.

Chapter 2
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Thanks ever so much, Pip!
If you ever need me to return the favor, just ask!
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Rosey Unicorn- Done! I had to be very picky with your piece though as I really couldn't find that much :) Its very well written.

Phantom- Done! I thought your story was really sweet :) Let me know when the next one is up and good luck in the contest!

Crouching Tuna- Done as well! There are quite a few nitpicks sorry, I did find your story funny though :P looking forward to reading more!
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Pipzie! thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

I was wondering if you'd mind checking the second chapter? To see if I didn't disappoint you :D?

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Thanks, once more!
*Kat*
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A Pippidooda review? Yes, please ^^

If you don't mind, I'd like a review ;)


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Kat- Done again! No dissapointment at all I really enjoyed it! :D I hope to read more soon :)

angels-symphony- Both done! Sorry it took me a while, I was really impressed by both of your pieces, they were both brilliantly written! :)
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Pippie, I looove your reviews, so I'm here to request another!

Unclaimed [1]

It has a prologue, that you'll have to read *sorry*

*Kat*
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Hello :) I would be very grateful if you would review the first chapter of my story for me please :)

A Lost Soul (working title) Chapter 1

Thank you! :D
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Kat- :D done!! I always love your story lines, I think you have a great one here to so I hope you stick with it :) sorry it took me a while!

Tally- I loved your story! Sorry I couldn't offer many comments, I was very impressed :)
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Thanks so much for the review, I really liked your suggestions - especially about describing the scent of the house & more of the boy's appearance. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Pippie! You have got to say I'm your biggest requester :D 'cause I'm here for another one. Would you mind reviewing chapter 2 of Unclaimed? Just click on the link of my previous post and check the related items thing. I don't have the link because I'm on my PSP. Thanks! I just really like to hear your opinion ;)
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Done Kat! ^^ Thank you for asking for another one of my reviews :P I'm really glad you like them and I always enjoy reading your stories! :D I'm really liking the storyline- hope you write more soon! :)
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Hello!! I've finally got ready the next part of "And there was drumroll."
Please can you review it?

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Done Lord Anzius!! :D I thought it was a really great piece, I didn't have much to comment on at all :)

Just a note aswell to everyone to say I'm giving YWS a rest, I haven't properly been on here in quite a while now and I feel I'm not really living up to my instructor duties. I may come back in future but for the time being at least I don't think I'll be doing any more reviews :( I will miss you guys and I've posted in the deparrture thread for anyone to see!

Bye everyone and thank you for appreciating my reviews!

Pippiedooda xxx
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