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Rosendorn
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:43 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:43 pm
Done everybody!

Anybody else?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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anti-pop
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:48 pm
anti-pop says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:48 pm
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^^ There ya go! It's not my best, so pleasepleaseplease tear it up! :D
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
-Libretto




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lilymoore
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 4:36 am
lilymoore says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 4:36 am
Would you want to look at my new one: post544829.html#544829

Thanks Rosey!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Master_Yoda
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 11:13 am
Master_Yoda says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 11:13 am
Hey Rosey,

Mind doing this for me? topic46903.html

It's a piece that's based on a true story. Very short.

Thanks so much. :)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522




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Rosendorn
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:10 pm
Rosendorn says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:10 pm
Done all!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Sura
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:22 pm
Sura says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:22 pm
Hi Rosey! ^w^ <3
~Please disregard this post. n_n;;;
Last edited by Sura on Thu Apr 23, 2009 3:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
I'm back!

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Throw away the prejudice
that fish live in fish bowls only!"




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Kamas
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:02 pm
Kamas says... · Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:02 pm
Hi Rosey!
Will you look at one of the three (they're all poems)
Thanks a lot!! :D (By the way go ahead and tear them to threads! I really wanna make these good!)

topic42799.html
(This one is called hand)

topic43385.html
(This one is called Poem for a Fallen Solider)

topic46613.html
(This one is called sadness)

Or if you prefer you can look through the rest of my stuff
Thanks!!
Bye
K A M A S :D
"Nothing is permanent in this wicked world - not even our troubles." ~ Charles Chaplin

#tnt




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Rosendorn
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:40 pm
Rosendorn says... · Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:40 pm
*Is very very very late in updating this*

Done everybody!

Still up to do more reviews!
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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anti-pop
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:44 pm
anti-pop says... · Tue Apr 28, 2009 8:44 pm
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Here's one from me, Roseykins! XD
...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
-Libretto




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Mars
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Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:14 pm
Mars says... · Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:14 pm
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Please and thank you!
<3
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-the wombats

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Rosendorn
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Sat May 02, 2009 3:28 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat May 02, 2009 3:28 pm
Done Pop!

Getting on it today, Mars.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Rosendorn
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Sat May 02, 2009 7:33 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat May 02, 2009 7:33 pm
Done Mars!

Anybody else? (Please note- Anything that gets posted on here for review will get my normal nit-pick review despite the war. Thank you. ^_^)
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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mizz-iceberg
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Mon May 04, 2009 3:19 pm
mizz-iceberg says... · Mon May 04, 2009 3:19 pm
Heya Rosey!

Could you pretty please critique this for me?

Letters to The Dead
Romantic Fiction
Written for Cal's contest.


Aaand the link is right here: post552779.html#552779


You rock Rosey!

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Rosendorn
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Mon May 04, 2009 9:52 pm
Rosendorn says... · Mon May 04, 2009 9:52 pm
Dome Mizz!

Anybody else?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Lethero
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Fri May 08, 2009 7:54 pm
Lethero says... · Fri May 08, 2009 7:54 pm
topic47812.html I need a grammar review on this and to have a some comments on how I read it.
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