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alwaysawriter
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:22 am
alwaysawriter says... · Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:22 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45235.html Please?
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Master_Yoda
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:07 pm
Master_Yoda says... · Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:07 pm
Hey there Rosey,

Can I have a review on this please: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45220.html

I'll even give you virtual cookies. :)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522




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Rosendorn
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Thu Mar 19, 2009 1:44 am
Rosendorn says... · Thu Mar 19, 2009 1:44 am
Always- Done

yrclever- I'll get it done soon!
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mhmmcolleenx0
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Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:07 am
mhmmcolleenx0 says... · Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:07 am
Could you review this please?

post528988.html#528988
It's in Other Fiction. It's a prologue also. It's not fabulous yet so that's why I need some input. If you could help I'd appreciate it! You can review it however you want. You don't have to go too in depth on grammar.
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Rosendorn
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Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:56 pm
Rosendorn says... · Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:56 pm
Everybody is done!

Who's next?
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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Lil_Pau
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Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:15 am
Lil_Pau says... · Sat Mar 21, 2009 4:15 am
Hi there Rosey!

I'd like a review on my poem, Resonance Of Tears.
Link: topic45391.html

I just want to know if there is anything I can improve.

Thanks!
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Rosendorn
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:46 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:46 pm
Lil_Pau- Done!

Okay everybody. I am getting a bit overwhelmed and burned out, so I am closed until further notice. Please do not ask me to review anything while I am closed.

~Rosey
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Rosendorn
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:06 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:06 pm
I'm back!

Anybody want a critique?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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xDudettex
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:34 pm
xDudettex says... · Sat Mar 28, 2009 4:34 pm
Hey Rosey =]

Glad to see that you're back!

I was just wondering if you could review my new prologue. It's in Other Fiction,

topic45838.html

I know it's really short, but I'd just like to know if you think the idea is worth continuing or not...

Thank you!

xDudettex
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Rosendorn
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:44 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:44 pm
Done!

More?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Eliza:)
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Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:48 am
Eliza:) says... · Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:48 am
Could you review my prologue in the Fantasy section please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45743.html
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Rosendorn
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Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:08 am
Rosendorn says... · Mon Mar 30, 2009 1:08 am
Done!

Anybody else?
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Eraqio
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Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:19 pm
Eraqio says... · Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:19 pm
hi ^_^

I would appreciate a review of my poem,
"Pawnshop Delights"

Genre is Lyrical poetry I believe
A story's not a story till you've made it up you see.
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xDudettex
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Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:03 pm
xDudettex says... · Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:03 pm
Hey Rosey =]

Could you please review the first chapter of my Untitled story?

I'd really appreciate it if you could :D

topic45904.html

Thanks!

xDudettex
'Stop wishing for the sunshine. Start living in the rain.' - Kids In Glass Houses.

'Would you destroy something perfect in order to make it beautiful?' - MCR artwork.




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Rosendorn
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Thu Apr 02, 2009 1:02 am
Rosendorn says... · Thu Apr 02, 2009 1:02 am
Eraqio- Done!

Dudette- So sorry I didn't get to it earlier! I'll get on it tomorrow. :D
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.



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