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Lil_Pau
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Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:43 am
Lil_Pau says... · Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:43 am
Hi Rosey!

I'd like a review on my 1st chapter of my ongoing story, Blessings, in the Other Fiction section.

Link: topic45999.html

Thanks! :D
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Rosendorn
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Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:13 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:13 pm
Lil- Working on it!
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Rosendorn
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Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:59 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:59 pm
Done!

Any more?
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Master_Yoda
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Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:11 pm
Master_Yoda says... · Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:11 pm
Hi Rosey,

After your great critique on the first chapter of Dreams of Giants, can I ask you to please review these pieces:

Dreams of Giants:
Prologue: topic44939.html

Chapter 1 Part 2: topic45511.html

Chapter 2 Part 1: topic46223.html

Thanks so much. :)
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And miles to go before I sleep.
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Rosendorn
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:45 am
Rosendorn says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:45 am
The prologue is done yrclever!
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Musicaloo7311
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:18 am
Musicaloo7311 says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:18 am
Mind reviewing the first chapter in my Other Fiction novel, Rosey? I hate to ask for reviews, but I hear yours are so darn good, and I really want to make this one its best. :)

topic46313.html

Review in whatever style you like, darling.

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Twit
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:06 pm
Twit says... · Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:06 pm
Title: Faery Dancer #1
Genre: Historical
Link: post539805.html#539805
Summary: Set in Stuart England, a girl runs away from a freak show and has to cope with living in the outside world.

Character impressions, how it works as a first chapter and general overall thing, please. :D Thanks!
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Rosendorn
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:44 pm
Rosendorn says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:44 pm
That took longer then I wanted, but everybody is finished!

Anybody else?
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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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wiccaryan
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:46 pm
wiccaryan says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:46 pm
I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Rosendorn
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:05 pm
Rosendorn says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:05 pm
I'm done Ryan! As much as I can do, anyways.

Who's next?
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*writewatiwant*
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Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:41 am
*writewatiwant* says... · Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:41 am
Hey Rosey! How you doin'?
Would you review my NaPo's thread, please?
topic46629.html

Thank you, Rosey!
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xDudettex
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Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:57 pm
xDudettex says... · Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:57 pm
Hey Rosey =]

Can you please review this for me?

It's chapter two, part one of my untitled story :)

topic46654.html

Thanks!

xDudettex
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Master_Yoda
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Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:54 pm
Master_Yoda says... · Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:54 pm
Hey Rosey,

When you get a chance can you please do this for me.

topic46665.html

It's the next piece of Dreams of Giants.

Thanks so much :)

Have a great one!
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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

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xDudettex
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:12 pm
xDudettex says... · Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:12 pm
Hey Rosey =]

Could you possibly review the next part of my Untitled story for me, please?

topic46846.html

Thank you!

xDudettex
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Rosendorn
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:19 am
Rosendorn says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:19 am
I'll get on it tomorrow Dudette!

Everybody before that request is finished, though!
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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.



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