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imapoemperson
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:38 pm
imapoemperson says... · Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:38 pm
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Thanks :D
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Lord Anzius
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:21 pm
Lord Anzius says... · Sat Mar 28, 2009 8:21 pm
EVI!!! How did the war go? you win?

Oh and here is a request: Can you please review this?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45764.html

the Mansion ch 8 part 1
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Evi
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Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:47 am
Evi says... · Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:47 am
Finally. Done. Whew.

The real world keeps getting in the way.

Terribly inconvenient, really.

:P
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imapoemperson
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:32 am
imapoemperson says... · Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:32 am
topic46134.html Thanks! :D
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Evi
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Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:22 pm
Evi says... · Sat Apr 04, 2009 6:22 pm
Check. ^^
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fluteluvr77
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Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:32 pm
fluteluvr77 says... · Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:32 pm
Evi! Can you review this? It's for Cat and June's horror contest :
topic46302.html
But, it isn't too scary...So, help would be welcome...
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Evi
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:39 am
Evi says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:39 am
Nothing in return is needed, Flute! Lovely job; you're done. ;)
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KailaMarie
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:45 am
KailaMarie says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:45 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46341.html I'd love if you could review this for me! Thanks.
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Evi
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:47 pm
Evi says... · Wed Apr 08, 2009 8:47 pm
Thanks Kaila; you're done, too. :lol:
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imapoemperson
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:04 pm
imapoemperson says... · Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:04 pm
I really need some reviews on this...thanks!
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Evi
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:23 pm
Evi says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:23 pm
Check, PoemPerson.
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anti-pop
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:51 pm
anti-pop says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:51 pm
Mind giving this a read, Eevee? :D

post544871.html?highlight=#544871

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Insomnia
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:42 am
Insomnia says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:42 am
Hey, Evi. :)

My story was neglected. I can has review, please? :P

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post542707.html?highlight=#542707

It's my attempt at minimalism for Kylan's competition. That's why there's almost no description, adverbs, etc. It's closed now, but I still want a little help because I think it's off. So, if you want, brutalise.

Also, if you want anything reviewed, just ask. :)




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lilymoore
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:37 am
lilymoore says... · Sun Apr 19, 2009 6:37 am
Hey Evi, one of your awesome reviews would be...well...awesome, if your not too backed up. Thanks.

topic46884.html
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Evi
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Thu Apr 23, 2009 12:36 am
Evi says... · Thu Apr 23, 2009 12:36 am
Poppity, Mat, and Lily are all done! ^^ Wonderful job, everyone.
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