A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
Maki-Chan, I have done yours (as it was the shortest of the 3 requests) and Moriah Lelia and EmmVeePi I will be posting your reviews hopefully on my next visit!! Thank you for posting your reviewing requests to me also - I appreciate it very much!! =D
Since you did such a wonderful job reviewing my last piece I was hoping that you might take a look at the second chapter. As always I'll be happy to return the favor and critique anything of yours that you want a review for. Thanks again!
I am not addicted to reading, I can quit as soon as I finish one more chapter.
I know that you already gave me some feedback on the prologue of my story, and I was really happy about that ^^ Could you look over the revised version as well?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43503.html
Also ... would you be willing to read my chapters before I post them? I'm aware that I could just post them and the guys here would review, but I kinda feel ... safer when I know someone other than me already looked over it ^^
That'd be great
Thanks in advance!
♥And if you go, I wanna go with you. And if you die, I wanna die with you♥
I have to apologise so much about the delay!!
EmmVeePi, My Sunshine, Moriah Lelia and Forever Threndy you're waiting so patiently for me to complete your requests and I really am sorry that I'm taking so long, but I promise you that I am working on your requests in any of the free time I have left!! Also, to make sure I complete these requests some time soon I've temporarily closed this thread, but I will be back and kicking as soon as I can!!
Thank you to all of you for putting your trust in me and asking me to review all your lovely work as well, I love seeing requests made of me
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