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Tue Jun 30, 2009 5:26 pm
aestar101 says...



I'm Aestar some of you will remember me, if you were here a year ago. I took a long hiatus, but now I'm ready to get back to writing and reviewing.

What I normally review
Poems
Fiction (mostly Romantic)
Lyrics

When I'll get back to you
Poems & Lyrics- as soon as I see it
Fiction-might take a little longer

"Payment"
I do this stuff for fun so you don't have to donate points or whatever else. But if you see fit then I'm open to gifts.
Character is what you have left when you've lost everything you can lose. - Evan Esar
Like my opinions a lot? Let me critique you. topic29146.html





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 12:49 am
TaylaChase says...



Will you please review this?

Fiction Fantasy
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topic50758.html

Thanks!

~Tayla
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
~Albert Einstein

I'm not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens.
~Anonymous

I am the author of my life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen and I can't erase my mistakes. . .
~Anonymous





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Tue Jul 14, 2009 12:59 am
MagnusBane says...



Would you please review this?

topic50661.html

The deadline Wednesday (it's a contest entry) and I'm kind of freaking out because it, well, sucks. :( I would definetely appreciate some advice on how to improve it
“Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” Anton Chekhov





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Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:16 pm
Maki-Chan says...



can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it).
It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. Cause I am going to explain everything in later chapters.

I have two chapters

prologue +chapter 1= topic50817.html

chapter 2= topic50871.html



If you don't like chapter one you don't have to continue on.



btw it is fanfict of Silent Hill.
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/





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Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:52 pm
Threnody says...



Hi!!!

Can you please review this poem for me? Be as harsh as you feel appropriate.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51214.html

Thanks!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~





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Mon Jun 12, 2023 12:15 pm
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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