Aestar's Reviewing Spot

I'm Aestar some of you will remember me, if you were here a year ago. I took a long hiatus, but now I'm ready to get back to writing and reviewing.

What I normally review
Poems
Fiction (mostly Romantic)
Lyrics

When I'll get back to you
Poems & Lyrics- as soon as I see it
Fiction-might take a little longer

"Payment"
I do this stuff for fun so you don't have to donate points or whatever else. But if you see fit then I'm open to gifts.

Will you please review this?

Fiction Fantasy
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topic50758.html

Thanks!

~Tayla

Would you please review this?

topic50661.html

The deadline Wednesday (it's a contest entry) and I'm kind of freaking out because it, well, sucks. I would definetely appreciate some advice on how to improve it

can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it).
It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. Cause I am going to explain everything in later chapters.

I have two chapters

prologue +chapter 1= topic50817.html

chapter 2= topic50871.html



If you don't like chapter one you don't have to continue on.



btw it is fanfict of Silent Hill.

Hi!!!

Can you please review this poem for me? Be as harsh as you feel appropriate.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51214.html

Thanks!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

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