Camp NaNo July '24: Nimloth

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🍃 The prophecy of Nimloth 🍃


NadyaStatham & Roxanne

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This novel is about five chosen ones who live in the normal human world until they get sucked in a portal to a magical world named Nimloth. Nimloth is taken over by an evil bad guy named Adrian Devonshire who will do anything to kill the chosen ones. As the five search for a way back to their world they find out they have these cool powers and then they learn that they have to stop the bad guy from destroying everything that's good and beautiful.

How do they do that? They don't even know each other, let alone handling their powers and defeating an evil spirit.




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Hey, well, trying to avoid getting killed together is a great bonding exercise ;) (Jk, don't try this at home, y'all xD) You got this, Roxanne and Nadya!! =D
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That... makes perfect sense XDD Thanks for popping by this very complex, very magical world of Nimloth, Mint! :D
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Main Characters



still drafting...
Angelica Esari
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family:
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Maya Rampal
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family:
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
Fire Fae: (They can manipulate fire (lava, flame) in every form and work with the power of it. Hot tempered! Their hands catch fire when they’re angry 🔥)
Fierce, Reserved

Weaknesses
Hot tempered
Trusts issues

Unique traits (physical)
Her ears are pierced over four.


Kate Hu
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family:
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
Hunter Fae (They are good with animals(training and riding them) and amazing hunters. They have super hearing and can talk animal language. They learn a great deal of species, animals and greens.)
Responsible

Weaknesses
Bossy
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Unique traits (physical)
Dragon tattoo (on her back)


Jack Cooper
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family:
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
Aqua Fae (They can manipulate water (water, ice and the power of the moon) in every form and work with the power of it. They are very powerful on full moons.)
believes in the impossible / determined

Weaknesses
Gullible; Easily distracted, tricked
And easily falls for traps
Scaredy cat


Marc Cromwell
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family:
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
Pixie (Flight, They can move around usually without being noticed. They can work with flowers very easily and are usually asked at weddings to help.)

Weaknesses
Not able to handle his anger well
Fragile from heart


Alexander Dekker
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
Wind fae (They can manipulate wind (wind, rain) and work with the power of air. (They can work with lightning and thunder.) They tend to glow sometimes when they’re feeling shy or happy. They’re not talkative and tend to keep to themselves. They are very good at hiding and can become invisible.)
some extra powers: NOT YET

Weaknesses
caring
has a sickness, lives on a bone potion >> due to the potion having some side effects, his hair is dirty blonde)


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The Antagonist: Adrian Devonshire
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Strengths/ Abilities/ Powers
no emotional attachment
Wind fae (They can manipulate wind (wind, rain) and work with the power of air. (They can work with lightning and thunder.) They tend to glow sometimes when they’re feeling shy or happy. They’re not talkative and tend to keep to themselves. They are very good at hiding and can become invisible.)

Weaknesses
Ignorant
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Possible death outcomes
stabbed with some holy dagger
stake through the heart



WARNING! Same as previous warning counts here. You have been warned...
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Species



Water

Mer 🧜🏻‍🧜🏻 (Needs a new name yet)
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Creatures who live under water and speak the mer language. They have sharper teeth and a tail with scales.

Whenever they sense danger, their teeth go in predator mode and become longer and sharper and make some kind of poison in them that if they bite their victim, they get paralysed immediately and die after four hours if not treated.

They breathe through their gills by their neck and above their hips. They eat seaweed and smaller fish. They are creatures who like to be left alone and they don’t willingly help the normal (fae) people.

Abilities
Truth tellers (they can smell the truth)
Move fast, the water is their territory

Weaknesses
Easily distracted, not focused.
They can’t stay long out of the water or else they turn in a fish and die.

Friends
Sirens

Enemies
Fae (they ask too much favours)
Elf (they are too positive)


Sirens
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Sirens are similar to Mer, but they grow legs when exposed to air, but their water form and waterborne gifts are rather different. Physically speaking, Sirens have the top half of a usually 'beautiful' human, with the bottom half of fish.

Abilities:
Hypnotising abilities
Cannot be trusted/ unpredictable

Weaknesses:
Sirens can only stay out of water for max 72 hours.

Friends
Mer
Aqua fae
Lighters

Enemies
Pixies (bc they eat them)
Fae don’t trust them


Land

Fae 🪶
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Fae are noble creatures, the royal bloodline of Nimloth are Fae and have been Fae for a long time. They have a human form.

Abilities
Mind-Readers
Smart and Clever

Weaknesses
Deep emotions affect their powers (tears their soul apart)

Enemies
Dislike Azula
Don’t trust sirens
Would rather not go to the mer people
They think low of elves


Elemental Fae:
Aqua
Fire
Winds
Azula
Hunters

Aqua Fae
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They can manipulate water (water, ice and the power of the moon) in every form and work with the power of it. They are very powerful on full moons.

Friends:Sirens


Fire Fae
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They can manipulate fire (lava, flame) in every form and work with the power of it. Hot tempered! Their hands catch fire when they’re angry 🔥


Wind Fae
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They can manipulate wind (wind, rain) and work with the power of air. (They can work with lightning and thunder.) They tend to glow sometimes when they’re feeling shy or happy. They’re not talkative and tend to keep to themselves. They are very good at hiding and can become invisible.


Hunter Fae
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They are good with animals(training and riding them) and amazing hunters. They have super hearing and can talk animal language. They learn a great deal of species, animals and greens.


Azula Fae (former Atom fae)
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They are disliked. An ancient fae of their tribe did something impossible and was cursed for it, that way everyone in his tribe until this day has to carry his burden. They’re variety of blue hair is a mark of the burden, hence their new name Azula fae.

And they are very judgemental, they can also look in a persons past without asking or doing anything.
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The user can control magical particles (such as atoms, molecules, protons, etc.), the basic building blocks of all mystical and supernatural forces in the universe. They can create objects like weapons, absorb magical particles from their surroundings, and produce various mystical effects.

Weaknesses
Iron/Copper chains >> diminishes their powers, iron burns their hands

Friends
Elves
Natura
Pixies

Disliked by:
Fae and other creatures
Hated by Lighters


Natura 🏞️
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Natura’s are very calm creatures (monk-like) who have the ability to manipulate nature and they are healing masters.
They have the physical form of a human and are naturally green, because they’re nature.

Abilities
Healing Masters
Nature manipulators

Weaknesses
Almost extinct
They tend to be super emotional, and feel strongly about nature and anything created by the planet. Therefore, they feel connected to any flora that surrounds them.
Can’t really fight, and they won’t because they are calm creatures. So they usually get enslaved because of this.

Enemies
Fire fae

Friends
Mer >> Considering


Elf 🧝🏻🧝🏻‍♀
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Elves are very social creatures and love to help around and are very hardworking. They have pointy ears and look like a normal human which makes it easy for them to blend in with the mortals whenever they want to visit the human world (if they cover their ears of course).
Elves are mostly underrated creatures in the world of Nimloth even though they do a lot of hard work.

Abilities
Organised
Telekinesis
Soldiers > Strongly build and have fighting abilities

Weaknesses
They tend to trust people easily

Enemies
Mer (because they are too aggressive and negative)


Sky

Pixies (other name coming yet)
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Pixies are small creatures who also have wings. They are known for being the messengers across the country, because they can turn so small that they are usually not in harm's way and the messenger doesn’t get killed this way.

They are usually confused with lighters because of their wings and are a far family of Natura’s.

Abillities:
Flight
They can move around usually without being noticed.
They can work with flowers very easily and are usually asked at weddings to help.

Weaknesses:
They are small and fragile


Lighters ☀️
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Lighters are and have beautiful (black) wings on their back. They are picky creatures, but sweet by heart. They have the ability to work with the light of the sun and are the weakest in the nights. They often get confused with Fire Fae, because of their temper. They can talk with dead people and connect others with them for just a while.

Abilities
Manipulate the power of the sun
Light powers

Weaknesses
Weak in the night

Dislike
Mer
Fae
All creatures

Friends
Sirens




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Side Characters



Raindrop Family
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Akshay and Ex-GF
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Zamoda & Kaz Firestone
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Raoul & Joshua (Hunters)
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Chris Cooper
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Beatrice (Beabug)
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Dragon Family
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Locations



Mundane world >> in need of a magical-ish name

Magical countries:
Nimloth
Syrared

Locations within Nimloth:
*Capital: ytbn
*Odebekien’s: (trees as sign for hide outs)
- Sleepy Odebekien
- Arallay Odebekien
*Forest:
- Deepvine
School:
- Dalmon
Dangerous places:
- Troll Cave
- Bubble river
- Foggy Village
- (Crystal Castle)
Other:
- The pond (habitat of sirens/ mer)
- The Black Death/ The Black Graveyard (old battlefield)
- Never-ending paths of Nimloth (paths close to the Deepvine forest are alluring
and dangerous)
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I love how much thought you guys have put into your characters and world already!! Best of luck on this co-write project <3 <3
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Okay I love the powers and abilities of every character, and they totally seem to match the personalities of each character!!




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I love your details and organization, both of you!! Fantastic work with everything and I look forward to some final updates towards the end of this month :D
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Recap



Recap time! (on behalf of Nadya and me) Although both Nadya and I spent more time on holiday stuff than writing, we managed to get a few things done :D

Nimloth is a project we've been working on for quite some time and we've done a lot of work on it. In July of this year we set some goals, made a nice little wfp and started. There was a lot of worldbuilding, more than we put into the thread. We made a map of Nimloth to put all the locations in, which also helped to create a clear storyline, as the novel is chronological.

The character development, as most of you must've seen, was immense. A lot of time was spent on character development (and it was totally worth it!! XDD). Based on the characters came the twists and turns which, if you heeded the warning, you are completely unaware of (if you are aware, I can hardly blame you, because I'm pretty sure I would've read them too XD).

We also went through a few tiny parts of the draft we already had and started rewriting them. So far we have two chapters. Each chapter gets three perspectives, and there are 6 main characters??

Pheww, seems like we did do some stuff XD There's still a lot to do, and we'll continue as time allows. A big thanks to everyone who left a comment <33 And even if you only scanned the first page, thanks for taking a look at this mad, magical, complex project :D

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“It is always sad when someone leaves home, unless they are simply going around the corner and will return in a few minutes with ice cream sandwiches.”
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The worldbuilding and character development look so cool!! Love that you two focused so much on character development, as I'm learning more and more just how important multifaceted and deep characters are :] Awesome job this month, both of you!! :D
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