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Sounds like a cheep romance novel you would find at a drugstore. Probably a best seller because so many women bought it, haha. Too corny and expected for my taste--sorry love!


Beasts

Sounds like some sort of sci-fi horror where some sort of animal mutates and attacks everybody!


Two Teens' Forever

the apostrophe says that the teens own "forever" but it still made me tilt my head until I understood. It's just ackward,and not immediatly catching YA ish. Hehe, since you're trying to find all these romantic titles Alice, I suggest writing your story first off, and let the title come from the text, so it is original and not a cliché fest. (Don't feel bad, I write a lot of really cliché title!)

Beast among Animals

(I already wrote the story first, having trouble coming up with a title that fits all three parts xD)

Sounds kinda akward, people usually associate Beasts with different types of animals, vicious ones or beasts of burdon, so it doesn't make any sense to me.

Forever

random and not nearly specific enough.



Firebrand

Hm, it's intriguing. I'm awful at guessing but if I had to, I'd say the title is either a name or maybe refers to some magical brand of shoes or something...definitely something fantasy-ish, but I would pick it up =)

Star Crossed

Some sort of sci-fi and/or romance novel. If the cover art indicated the former rather than the latter, I'd pick it up and read the dust jacket. Intriguing enough to create an image without giving too much away.


Her Painted Blood Has Stained My Soul (for a short story)

I think it's a bit too long--it's a story in and of itself. Just something like "Painted Soul" would be pretty cool.

Memorize Another Golgotha

sounds like a horror - someone who kills their victims by crucifying them. i'd be scared to pick it up lol.



Defective
(for a change of pace)

Ooo... Thanks to me reading Beauty and the Beast last night my first thought was something similar to that. Or else someone who has this great flaw and has to go through life dealing with it... maybe someone who is blind or in a wheel-chair or is missing an arm or a leg.. defentally realistic teen fiction.

Mine kinda has two names...
Fallon (A Kingdom beyond Reality Novel)

Reminds me of the Billy hunder novels. But it could also be very funny. I would so read it.

Broken Promises

I'd be interested to pick it up. Sounds like a dramatic one, hopfully that's what ur going for. I'd still pick it up though.

Here's my title.

Coded.

Sounds cool, like a sci-fi film? I'd pick it up and have a look at the blurb.

Book 1
The Immortals
Book 2
Spawn
Book 3
As Time Ends

i like the last one the best. "Spawn" is pretty cool. "Immortals" I've seen too many times.

sounds like Sci-fi thriller crazy books. i'd maybe pick it up.






Firebrand

It sounds like a fantasy title, most likely having to do with people with pyrokinetic abilities?

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