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"The All-Seeing Glasses" is pretty cool, but I usually have difficulty with anything with 'chronicle' in the title. Chronicle suggests itself to me something long and tedious, so you might just want to have "The Collectors" as your series title.

The Terrible Misfortune of Hernando Montezuma Cortez

It sounds like something that will be presented in a historic fashion. Also sounds like something that will have some comedic value. ^_^

Diary of a Villain

Well, because I've read the first couple posts, I would say that it was an extremely cool story. But for the title: I've never been one to get in to 'diary' novels. But the twist at the end is quite cool!

StoweAway

StoweAway!
I really like the story (btw, sorry it's taking me so long to crit) but I read another book called 'STOWAWAY' which I kind of hated, so... it puts a damper on my opinion of the name. But it sounds like a kind of pirate-ish, sea-faring novel.

Alphess

XD it's about wolves huh? Alpha kinda gives it away. It sounds really cool. I would pick it up right away. I'm a sucker for cool titles.

StoweAway

I've read another book called Stowaway. The alternate spelling doesn't make it more interesting to me. I think I'd like it better if it were two seperate words.


Captain's Cook

I think of it as being about the life of a cook on some kind of ship and his relationship with the captain. It really seems like a pirate story for some reason.

The Collectors: The All-Seeing Glasses

Hmm. I am tempted to say it's a modern tale of a group of people who go about collecting magical-type items that become part of some bigger plot involving an opposing organization. A series, obviously.

That or it sounds like it might be some epic adventure similar to His Dark Materials. =P

Diary of a Villain vs Diary of a Wizard's Henchman

I'll take which one you think is better and what you think it's about. =P

Diary of a villain. That one is way cooler than the other one.

I've already graded this title, so I'll just say it again. It is a way cool title, but diary stories don't usually interest me unless the topic is really cool.

StoweAway

lol. You know I didn't notice you'd spelt it 'Stowe' until I read the second part? XD Reading this title, I think that the story is going to be about a stow-away, but seeing the interesting spelling I know that there is a second more significant meaning that I will only uncover if I read the story.

Which I will, very soon. >.<

Diary of a Villain vs Diary of a Wizard's Henchman

I'll take which one you think is better and what you think it's about. (not you bbb)

Diary of a Villain

Diary of a Wizards Henchman is a little long, intimidates me. the diary thing interests me because of the villan part.... so Definetly Diary of a Villain (I still have to critique the second chapter....)

Here's mine!

My Forgotten Dreams

Forgotten Dreams... sounds like a love story. I don't know... I would picture the front cover having a girl under the moon. The girl would be lying on her back...

I would read it though. Sounds very interetest.g

BBB

StoweAway

Makes me thinking of Robinson Crueso. Although if blurb sounded intersting and cover was good I'd read it.

Chasing Rainbows.

Sounds like you're trying to find a pot of gold...?


The Party Killer

Sounds like some murder story, I imagine it like something Christopher Pike would write and that's a compliment.

I've no other story so again

Chasing Rainbows.