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Like some futuristic weirdo society thing?


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I just lost the game.




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To be honest, the title just makes it sound like the usual fluffy, soppy, cliche'd romance. Theres nothing wrong with that at all, i only read romance myself, and i do enjoy the fluff, in moderation. But i'm sorry, the title aint that great.

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To me it sounds like a romance. I'm sorry to say I wouldn't buy it (only because I don't read romance), the title seems a little cliche, but other than that its fine.

The Broken World
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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A Fantasy about a world in turmoil. If cover art was good and blurb was interesting enough I'd buy it.

Chasing Rainbows.
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Maybe a Romance, or perhaps a troubled life. If it wasn't a romance I'd probably buy it. I do quite like the title.

The Gate of Glendon
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Sounds like a kind of cliched fantasy. Sounds not bad though. =P

Ever Wayard
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Sounds like it might be a name. But then I don't know..hmm. Wayard? I guess it is a name. I had read 'wayward". I'm not entirely sure what I think of it. It doesn't bring anything to mind...I'd prefer something that clued me in.

Neither Snow nor Rain
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oops! I meant...

Ever Wayward

Anyhow, I like yours. I would pick it up and scan the blurb. Nice title :-D
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Ah! Now I don't know which one to comment on. :roll:

Hmmm, 'Neither Snow nor Rain' sounds kind of cool. Sounds like some sort of emotional drama to me, but like it could be about anything. It doesn't give much away, but it's enough to sound interesting.

'Ever Wayward'; immediately makes me think it's an epic for some reason. Is it?

In a Besieged City
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Wow! Yours sounds like something about the Holocaust. In A Besieged City... Definitely sounds like a Holocaust book title to me. I'm actually currently reading a book about the Holocaust (The Book Thief) and your title just made me think of that book. Definitely original and catching.

Gay is My Ex
Tom Riddle: "You read my diary?"
Harry Potter: "At first, I did not know it was your diary. I thought it was a very sad, handwritten book."




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Ah yes, you said about that. That sounds kind of funny, because it gives away a bit of the plot (if it is about an ex being gay). I woul read the blurb and see if there is more to it than the title.

Ever Wayward
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Sounds like a romance... maybe historical. I'd pick it up to check, and if it wasn't romance, I might flick through it. :)

The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land in order to Defeat Evil and Save The World
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10/10 ZOMG! Epic! I shwat I would be saying if I thought it was good. lol, everything cliched about fantasy in one line. hehe!

Our Kindred
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Hmm, sounds like some kind of history or fantasy story that is some how related to ancestors. I'd flip through it to see what it was about.

Big Island, Little World




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A book about the holocaust...no, it's not, but it is about a Jewish guy and his grandfather is a holocaust survivor. That's sort of very close. :D

Big Island, Little World...I can't decide between it sounding like a travel book (a la Bill Bryson) or a book about a figurative journey of discovery, but something like that.

The Art of Growing Up
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