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It sounds like someone had a terrible life and this is the story of how the life became better. I don't read ones like that, but I know a lot of people at my school who'd read it.

Vampire Kingdom
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I'm not fan of vampire stories unless it's original. So if blurb was good I'd read it. What will cover be like.

Chasing Rainbows.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
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Either a fanciful Wizard of Oz-type story or else a literary piece about lost love. Either way, it would catch my attention but not hold it unless the cover art was good.

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I have personal issues with the word 'purge', in context with bodily fluids. So maybe just 'purge'? Short and sweet is what you want with this one, I think.

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I have no idea what that means. Is it a name? Whatever it is it sounds exotic, i'd read the first chapter to see if i was into it.

Thanks For Something




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It sounds like either a romance novel where a girl has to cope with her boyfriend leaving her (all the while engaging in various relationships with secondary characters) or a story about reflection after the passing of someone the character knew in a strange way. It sounds very much like a typical "young adult" novel, probably better suited for girls than guys. I'd have to read the synopsis before checking it out, though.

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Er... I had to look that one up. xD

Um... a realistic fiction about discovering the truth or... something. I might read the synopsis.

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It sounds like a story about Scottish/Irish settlers near the Appalachians(sp?) during the French and Indian War or a spunky out of the norm girl that runs around town after church and befriends two old men that just sit and drink outside the whiskey store.

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I get the feeling that it's about self discovery. Reminds me of Across the Universe.

Islanders




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Sounds like that series by Gordan Korman. Maybe about, like, a tribe of island natives or a bunch of kids who get marooned on an island?

Wolves against a white sky (I'm considering it for my novel)
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It's like Snakes on a Plane. Title says it all. Wolves and a white sky! =D

I probably wouldn't pick it up. Fantasy and wolves aren't really my thing.

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Sounds interesting, but I get the feeling that it isn't about whisky. *is brain-dead*

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I would imagine a time when the stars are disappearing in the far future. and everyone is loosing hope for survival, and this is a story of one girl who starts finding hope again. i might read it.

The Midnight Family
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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Sounds like a slightly depressing Adams' Family...

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Sounds like a teen romance to me. I might read it depending on the cover.

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