Title Feedback

Jennafina · 2007-01-03T19:18:39Z

I'm not sure if this will work, but maybe? :D One person posts a title of theirs, then the next person says what they think it's about, or something about it. Basically what they think of it, weather or not if it was on a shelf they would pick it up. Then they say their title. For example: a: Title feeback... Hm... Too the point, not wordy, but also boring and not very catchy. It sounds like exactly what it is. Bubble Tea b: It sounds like literature for young teen girls. If I had to guess at the plot, a girl goes to a strange bubble tea café, meets the boy of her dreams, then has a rocky experiance that ends happily. With puppies and rainbows. Songs of Oritsu

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:12 pm

Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:12 pm

The only one that really calls to me is 5....

Muddy Water

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:18 pm

Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:18 pm

I would look at it, definitely. Depends on what it was about though.

Starlit

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:20 pm

Cpt. Smurf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:20 pm

I like it, it sounds fresh and interesting. It reminds me (somewhat obviously) of Stardust, and I liked that - well, the film, anyway.

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:24 pm

Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:24 pm

Awesome! It sounds like a Werewolf book--I'd buy it

I think I'll use 'Starlit' for my story then

This is the title of someone in my class:
Violet

everything i loved
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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:32 pm

Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:32 pm

Its kinda simple I would picture it as one of those teen books.

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:35 pm

Wolf says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:35 pm

Sounds very angsty and possible even violently emotional. I would look at it then put it down, unless the back cover was interesting.

Not my title...
Speckle Dew
(I have to go now)

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Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:39 pm

Gwenevire says... · Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:39 pm

Sounds kinda Gay

Bye...

Heavenly Sword

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:14 am

BigBadBear says... · Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:14 am

Sounds like a fantasy. Maybe a girl/guy inherits a sword that has 'heavenly' powers or qualities. Probably not something I would pick up.

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:55 am

Via says... · Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:55 am

Mmm redundant? That's all I can think of, it's always dark at midnight? It just doesn't stick out to me as anything special.

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Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:03 am

MadHatter says... · Sat Nov 24, 2007 5:03 am

I like it. Be best for a comedy book dealing with (No duh) winter or something

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Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:46 pm

Twit says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:46 pm

A weird book like the Guide. Lots of random. Possible fantasy.

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Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:51 pm

Stori says... · Wed Dec 05, 2007 6:51 pm

Interesting. Maybe a comedy?

Angel's Feather.

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Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:53 pm

MadHatter says... · Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:53 pm

Maybe a spiritual book of sorts

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Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:07 am

Via says... · Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:07 am

Teenybopper comedy, geeky kid and a prom. Popular girl, money involved.

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Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:10 am

jonny911 says... · Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:10 am

Something like Freaky Friday, with a prediction or something making things crazy.

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