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WARRIORS, The Second Moon [DT]



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Thu Aug 25, 2016 5:35 pm
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sheysse says...



Yeah, that works. While we're at it, maybe have Cedarpaw tag along as an experience and bring Maplepaw and Deadfoot, since all apprentices need to visit the moonpool. Then we would have everyone together and Swiftleap and Goldenstar could talk while the others are mingling.
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 5:39 pm
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Sounds good to me!
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 5:40 pm
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Alright.
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 5:50 pm
Gymnast2801 says...



Sounds good :)
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 5:55 pm
sheysse says...



Sounds like, as long as @Lael agrees, that's what we're gonna do. But before we do that, everyone make an I troductory post so we can understand the characters and easily have them act in our future posts.
  





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Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:17 pm
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So like, post a small post here of our characters introducing themselves here or post what they are doing on the roleplay?
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:22 pm
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Do a post (it you want you can make it over 1000 words, because of my challenge) in the role play about what they're the day before the journey... After Cedarpaw is made Cedarpaw.
  





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Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:36 pm
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Okay
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 8:00 pm
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Lael says...



Yes, I agree. But it wouldn't make the other clans hostile if such a big group of ThunderClan cats cross their territory at once? Even if they say they are taking the apprentices to the Moonpool? (Also I thought the apprentice tradition died put after they left the Forest and the Moonstone? Or is my buddy Wikipedia wrong? :P)

@Mage okay. I will post before you then!
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 8:09 pm
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I thought it did too. The cats seemed less connected with Starclan to me once they left the forest except for the medicen cats.
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 8:15 pm
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The other clan's shouldn't know, because they can go to the moonpool without crossing other territories. The moonpool is behind Thunderclan territory. As for the apprentice tradition, I just thought it was done but not important enough to be written... After all, one of the main characters during the time of the moonpool was a medicine cat, so it wasn't really all that notable. Anyway, it could just be Goldenstar's tradition. Or maybe the idea has been brought back to the clans, seeing as it has been a long time. Perhaps they do it after the war against the dark forest, because Starclan helped fight.
  





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Thu Aug 25, 2016 8:21 pm
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I like your reasoning @Sheyren, but seeing as I've only finished reading the first series (but I do know the majority of the events that happen afterwards, and have read the first book in the new series), I don't think I'm the best person to decide what happens here. Basically, I'll go with whatever you all want to do.
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I will go with whatever too. This isn't a real warrior cat book so I don't think we have to keep it 100% authentic but I also see why we would want to. I will let y'all decide as I'm up for anything.
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Lael says...



Okay, let's just go with @Sheyren's idea. :) I don't mind either way.

I will probably make a post on Saturday.
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Thu Aug 25, 2016 9:35 pm
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Then we'll go with my original idea. Thanks for the cooperation!
  








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