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when i blow you kisses will you catch them?

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Mon Mar 27, 2023 8:06 pm

luxeterna says... · Mon Mar 27, 2023 8:06 pm

when i blow you kisses, will you catch them?

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1. city of gold
2. smatter
3. distance
4. gum wrapper hearts
5. fleet
6. sunbeams
7. underestimate
8. kneeling at a stagnant throne
9. this is the same way of flirting as birds
10. five minutes from midnight
11. pulsate, skew, pale
12. wings, garden
13. response
14. truly love
15. distant memories of our hands
16. simplicity
17. home
18. you for you
19. Proverbs 8:27
20. due
21. better
22. dedication
23. candlelight
24. He has a green thumb
25. zephyr
26. stars
27. daisies; innocence & new beginnings
28. the main character's love interest
29. tickled mirth
30. when i blow you kisses will you catch them?

Last edited by luxeterna on Mon May 01, 2023 12:22 am, edited 15 times in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Mon Mar 27, 2023 8:17 pm

Euphory says... · Mon Mar 27, 2023 8:17 pm

your thread title is the loveliest thing ever <333

bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq,

mera kaam ishq,
mera kaam ishq

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Sat Apr 01, 2023 7:42 pm

luxeterna says... · Sat Apr 01, 2023 7:42 pm

1. city of gold

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:02 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Sun Apr 02, 2023 8:29 pm

luxeterna says... · Sun Apr 02, 2023 8:29 pm

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YWS says my file is too chonky for my notebook picture so i copy pasted and didn’t bother to format C:

2. smatter
the sun glows warmly
at this golden hour
and my thoughts turn to you
as the soft buds flower

they grin up at me lovingly
and i recall your own sweet smile;
an echo of your laugh in the wind

bright vibrant & beautiful--
like you-- they bloom
there's a longing in my heart;
oh won't you be here soon?

the sky smatters with twinkling
like your own freckles
or that shine in your eyes
is the breeze carrying butterflies?

Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:02 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Points 267

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Mon Apr 03, 2023 7:19 pm

luxeterna says... · Mon Apr 03, 2023 7:19 pm

3. distance

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Points 267

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Tue Apr 04, 2023 9:55 pm

luxeterna says... · Tue Apr 04, 2023 9:55 pm

4. gum wrapper hearts

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Tue Apr 04, 2023 10:44 pm

Euphory says... · Tue Apr 04, 2023 10:44 pm

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"gum wrapper hearts" has me swooning, both the concept of it and your poem - it's just so SWEET! your entire thread just makes my heart burst in all the good ways :") Can't wait for more of your poetry <333

bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq,

mera kaam ishq,
mera kaam ishq

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Thu Apr 06, 2023 3:41 am

luxeterna says... · Thu Apr 06, 2023 3:41 am

5. fleet

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Thu Apr 06, 2023 1:58 pm

Quillfeather says... · Thu Apr 06, 2023 1:58 pm

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first off, even the title is amazing and has such emotion, and it just keeps on getting better!!
I actually quite like the idea of writing it down in your own handwriting, makes it look so beautiful instead of the straight aligned letters that one gets with typing. I especially love your day four poem! There's something so poetic about the gum wrapper that I had never thought of. I can't wait to see more! (Also might I suggest an image resizer like Tiny.png or something? Could help when your file size is too big and you don't want to mess with the quality!)

that the powerful play goes on
And you may contribute a verse

If you ever need to talk I am here for you<3

"All great change is preceded by chaos" - Deepak Chopra
Fight through the chaos, there are good things ahead<333

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Thu Apr 06, 2023 7:32 pm

Hijinks says... · Thu Apr 06, 2023 7:32 pm

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holy heck "an infinite second / is all we need" speaks to me on such a deep level - it captures that feeling of being so happy and just wanting to stay in a moment forever, and never wanting it to become a memory, and feeling kind of anxious about the fact that you can't hold onto it forever. Such a good line <3

I also think the handwritten style is a really cute idea; it makes the thread feel personal and artsy. Keep up the great poeting!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)

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Fri Apr 07, 2023 1:57 am

luxeterna says... · Fri Apr 07, 2023 1:57 am

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@Quillfeather, the handwriting thing wasn’t completely intentional but i’m glad you enjoy it haha! (i simply dont have time to type them out and format, so i just write them in my journal and take the quick shots. they’re in their raw first form too, so i think my scribbles and stuff bring it together. thank you thank you!

@Seirre thank you so much! I was actually stumped yesterday when i wrote that so I’m really glad that my word barf made sense 😂 Thanks so much!

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Gender

Points 267

Reviews 6

Fri Apr 07, 2023 1:58 am

luxeterna says... · Fri Apr 07, 2023 1:58 am

6. sunbeams

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True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Fri Apr 07, 2023 4:27 am

FireEyes says... · Fri Apr 07, 2023 4:27 am

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bruh I was gonna do something with callused hands. Oh well, time to make something original out of something not.

All joking aside, love this one so much. Special person with a special poem with special imagery. It's so nice.

I won't go down by myself, but I'll go down with my friends
I'm taking back the life you stole
Came a time when every star fall brought you to tears again

-My Chemical Romance

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Sat Apr 08, 2023 1:40 am

luxeterna says... · Sat Apr 08, 2023 1:40 am

7. underestimate

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:04 am, edited 1 time in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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Gender

Points 267

Reviews 6

Sun Apr 09, 2023 1:06 am

luxeterna says... · Sun Apr 09, 2023 1:06 am

8. kneeling at a stagnant throne

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Last edited by luxeterna on Wed Apr 26, 2023 1:05 am, edited 4 times in total.

True love is the greatest thing in the world
except for a nice mlt

Wonderin' if your heart's still open
And if so I wanna know what time it shuts

Can't you tell that I'll write a song about nothing
To tell you that you're something else

.˳˳.⋅ઇ ଓ

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