Hi goldflame, I have written a short story which has some grammatical mistakes and I am not able to rectify them. I request you to help me with it and may be give your opinion. Thanks!
According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground. — The Bee Movie
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