Young Writers Society

Heeeelllllooooo people of YWS!

Do you have a short story, novel, or poem that you'd love to have reviewed?? Then this is the place for you!

If you need something reviewed, just drop a link in a reply below! I'll get to it within two days or less.

Things I will review:
1. Novel chapters (Nothing over three chapters, please. And if you post a chapter here that's later than the first chapter just know that I will read all previous chapters first in order to understand what is going on)
2. Short Stories
3. Poems

Things I will not review:
1. Lyrics. I feel like I really can't help anyone with this because I don't know what I would say.
2. Essays/Articles. One look at my grades and you'll know why this is in the will not review column.

Keep writing!
**Noelle**

My dearest Noelle. I have posted my second poetic attempt to YWS and as I believe you have reviewed my prose before(?) I would love a review from you on my poetry. Plz and Thx. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100106

Anyone else need reviews??

Yes pleaseeeee. This is a short story, mystery.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101327

Would you review my poem? Please and thank you.

work.php?id=101373

Hey noelle Id love if you would review my second chapter of Risk for me . P.s. I have revised my previous two entries, and would love if you read them again. Only if you want to though. Im in the middle of editing, and I found that I couldnt get very far, and that I needed outside opinion, and yours poped up in my head as the very best. Thank you so much
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This has to be reviewed ASAP. I need this for my exam practicing, and it is tomorrow!

work.php?id=101795

It's roughly 800 words, so it'll take a minimal amount of time

Hey Noelle,

could you review this for me, please?

work.php?id=101858

Thanks

It would be great if you could review this short story of mine. It's a mystery/horror, thanks in advance!

Noelleeeeeeeeeeeee,

Would you mind checking out the first chapter of my novel when you find the time, please? It's something I posted way back in September and if I remember correctly, you read it when I posted it back then. As a result, I'm really curious to see what you think of the slightly revamped version:

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)

I've also tried to edit accordingly with the reviews I have already, so I'd like to see if said editing has actually been successful.

Thanks a bundle!

Just recently reopened my thread! Come on by if you have a request!

Could you review Devil Touch Prologue (New) for me? I've been waiting forever and there's only so much patience my brain can hold XD Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ><

Hello Noelle. Could you please review The Perfect Thief (Revised) Prologue Thanks

Hello could you review mine, please! The Angelon Kingdom (Draft)
and if you have time, this is my baby...Kiss the Damsel Chapter One

Hey Noelle,

I was wondering if you could review this for me:
Where Sad People Turn Into Flying Saucers