Genre: Action/Adventure and maybe a little bit of fantasy xD
Short description of the first part of chapter 1: Two, martial artist brothers adopted by a small village, practice their fighting art daily and live out their lives together, until the whole village is attacked by bandits, as this happens both of the brothers defend the village by fighting against them.
Previously on the Chalice of Life: a powerful artefact named the Chalice of Life is stolen from the deepest vault of a bank. The Chalice of Life is used by a dark figure, but he is displeased by the outcome as the chalice is incomplete. He sends his underling to meet an associate that could help him retrieve the other part of the Chalice. At the same time, a teacher and his friend discovers where the other part of the Chalice might be located.
Excellent template you have there, I have something I think you might love to read, it's proving to be going well but more input the better as I'm currently working on chapter 2.
Here are 2 pieces from a novel, they're only short so It shouldn't take too long.
If anything just an opinion or some suggestions would be great.
Name of Work: Arthur's Showdown Genre: Realistic fiction Link: Arthur's Showdown Special requests: i intend to send this work to a literary magazine in hopes of it being published. i need complete, brutal honesty on every aspect. grammar, sentence structure, characters, word choices... everything. Important information: the story revolved around Arthur and his decision to fight back after a loan shark decides to execute him.
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