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K's Killa Kritiques



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Sun Jul 29, 2012 3:22 pm
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Cadi says...



work.php?id=96406

Ready for shredding, at your leisure.

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"The fact is, I don't know where my ideas come from. Nor does any writer. The only real answer is to drink way too much coffee and buy yourself a desk that doesn't collapse when you beat your head against it." --Douglas Adams
  





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Sun Jul 29, 2012 3:58 pm
Karzkin says...



Prolixity done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:12 pm
Karzkin says...



ImHero done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:02 pm
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Karzkin says...



Other Lumi done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:16 pm
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Karzkin says...



Cadox done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Aug 05, 2012 11:19 pm
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katiehorsie says...



work.php?id=96636

*Sits back to watch it be killed :D*
  





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Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:50 am
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Lumi says...



I don't even I think it's in the key of H but who really knows anymore
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:18 pm
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prolixity says...



I finally got around to editing this, so maybe you wouldn't mind looking at it a second time? No rush of course. I just want to know if it's any better, or worse. I hope it's not worse, haha.
She reflected. "I prefer stories about squalor."
"About what?" I said, leaning forward.
"Squalor. I'm extremely interested in squalor."
  





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Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:33 pm
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Karzkin says...



katiehorsie done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sat Aug 25, 2012 5:33 pm
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Karzkin says...



prolixity done again.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Thu Mar 21, 2013 9:01 pm
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carbonCore says...



Hello sir, I am but a simple carpet merchant
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Sun Mar 24, 2013 2:06 pm
Karzkin says...



cC done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:05 pm
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Rainn says...



Here you are :)
Thanks!

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:54 pm
Karzkin says...



Rainn done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:46 pm
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primrose22 says...



Hello! Would you mind helping me with my poem: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100782 (I encourage you to be as honest as possible. Please! :)
"we are for each other: then
laugh, leaning back in my arms
for life's not a paragraph

And death i think is no parenthesis"

-- e. e. cummings

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