I never cease to be surprised by how amazing everything you write is, I must say though- this is especially good. I really love it (if saying that to this doesn't make someone weird) and that the images (sick and twisted as they were) were startlingly crisp and clear and somehow just perfect. The fact that this was posted in Poetry especially made me smile, because poetry shouldn't just be rhyming, short lines of imagery. You prove that well!
Although, the lack of capitalization and the odd(ish) punctuation mildly threw me off. Just saying.
This was great!
Renn
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