"The fact is, I don't know where my ideas come from. Nor does any writer. The only real answer is to drink way too much coffee and buy yourself a desk that doesn't collapse when you beat your head against it." --Douglas Adams
I finally got around to editing this, so maybe you wouldn't mind looking at it a second time? No rush of course. I just want to know if it's any better, or worse. I hope it's not worse, haha.
She reflected. "I prefer stories about squalor." "About what?" I said, leaning forward. "Squalor. I'm extremely interested in squalor."
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