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Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:28 pm
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Kyllorac says...

Review the Person Above You

What the title says! Basically, you review the last person who posted in this thread and then post a reply linking a work you want reviewed. The next person reviews you and posts a link to their work, and on it happily goes.

To prevent unfortunate cases where you review someone, but someone else posts their request faster than you, you can reserve a spot with a post. However, you can't request a review until after you've reviewed the person above you.


- Review the person above you. Or else. If you don't, your post will be deleted.

- Play nice. That means no spam/one-liner reviews.

- If you reserve a post, don't take longer than a day to do the actual review.

What happens if someone doesn't follow the rules?

If you catch someone not following the rules, shoot one of us green folks a PM. We'll deal with that dratted rule-breaker and see that a review is sent the proper way. :)


To get things started: The Greater Evil
Screwing with gender since 1995.

There are no chickens in Hyrule.

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Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:47 pm
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Lumi says...

This is my favorite thing.


Perhaps someone could give some love to Rahab?
regardless of warnings

the future doesn't scare me at all

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Sun Oct 16, 2011 3:37 pm
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Dreamwalker says...

Done and done!

Anyone up for poetry?

october comes too early.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S

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Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:50 pm
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BlueAfrica says...

Okay, I reviewed! Unfortunately I don't know how to do the thing where you make the title of the work the link, so here is the link to my work:


It's only four lines, I hope you can actually find something to review about it! At least tell me how you felt about it...

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Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:41 pm
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Mikko says...

Done, my dear!

Hey you! Yes, you coming to take a look at this thread, mind taking a look at this?

when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams

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Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:36 pm
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joshuapaul says...

Read my latest

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Thu Jan 05, 2012 6:10 pm
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ChocoCookie says...

I don't have anything to review. xP
I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living.

New to YWS? We'll help you out! <3'

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Sat Jan 07, 2012 12:04 am
Rosendorn says...

Okay, just to get this kicked back into life...

An old piece of mine still in need of reviews.
Formerly Rosey Unicorn

A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.


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Sat Jan 07, 2012 3:48 pm
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kasimkaey says...

Done, viewtopic.php?f=16&t=90606&p=936897&hilit=revil#p936897
'Do or do not, there is no try.' Professor Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore.

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Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:14 pm
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AllessandreP says...

Reviewed! I'd like this reviewed: viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92645
Allessandre P
I was on here as Allessandre, but I changed my email and forgot about this site for a while. By the time I came back, I'd forgtten my password. My old account

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Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:57 am
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Dragongirl says...

Finished with that review.

Hey, could you check out the first chapter to my novel 'Hook'

"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
- Bill Cosby

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Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:57 am
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DrunkOnWriting says...

KA-BOOM. this is marvelous.

check out the first chapter of my novel "Has Ben, Never Was"


thanks kiddos:)

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Thu Jan 26, 2012 10:17 pm
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thetraveler says...

I reviewed yours :)
Now someone else... could someome review my poem?
"Elementary, my dear Watson"
:D :D :D
Spoiler! :

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Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:09 am
SerenityAmour says...

To TheTraveler,

I enjoyed your poem very much, and I left a review for ya!
I'd like for someone to check out this article.
The Lord informed me that he has plans for me;
Plans for me to prosper, and not to fail.....
With this in mind, I embrace each day with
aspirations of being all that I can be in order
to serve and please He who created me.


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Fri Jan 27, 2012 8:49 am
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AlfredSymon says...

Dear, Serenity

Your piece is now reviewed. I absolutely love it, by the way!

From another traveler

Hey everyone! Please critique my work, Amber Rise, an Alfred Dorn sonnet. Sorry for the long intro. It's a story actually, so, read the other chapters too!

Again, it's Amber Rise, in Lyrical Poetry!
Need some feed? Then read some! Take a look at today's Squills at In the News.

The Tatterdemalion takes a tattle!

"Stories are like yarn; just hold on to the tip and let the ball roll away"

Work expands to fill the time available for its completion.
— C. Northcote Parkinson