Alright, so I believe I'm all caught up with my reviews? I think so!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
In advance, I was writing for up to four hours nonstop on the first one for 9 days or so, and I didn't stop to correct errors often... I went back and corrected some recently and have fixed most of the ones there were, but there's still a lot of uncapitalized letters at the beginning of sentences and forgetting to put periods at the end of dialogue... this one is about telepaths... viewtopic.php?t=80792 it's super long so take your time if u want... I haven't written in it much for awhile but I started working on it again recently... this one is science fiction... viewtopic.php?t=80824 basically there's a war going on and this pacifist inventor creates a cloning machine that he reluctantly uses for war...
"It ain't what you don't know that gets you into trouble. It's what you know for sure that just ain't so." -Mark Twain
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Ah, it always feels good to finish poetry reviews! Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Hi Dreamwalker, I have really enjoyed reading your work and I'm looking for a good reviewer to hunt through my novel and tear it apart. I'm desperate to either make this thing into something worthwhile or get rid of it if it's awful. I am awful at judging my own work. If you would be willing to take a stab at it that would be awesome! Thanks so much:)
Okay guys, so I know I'm behind in my reviews and I will catch up. Just I'm gone this weekend.
Sunday I should be up and running once more.
~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Alright, so now its just the two novels! That means, it will take me a couple days, if not a week or two, to finish all of them. Its does mean, though, that I am up for more requests!
I do like novel reviewing, but one needs a break to do other reviews as well, ne? ;D
~Walker
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes
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