I've edited my story [Professor Morgenstern] a little bit from its initial conception. You said you would look over it, but I'll drop this over here as a reminder (if you still want to, that is). I'd love to hear your opinion.
Andhere is another one. Same vein as the last, though a little stronger, in my opinion. Also, don't feel you must respond to these requests. Casting over your WRFF, I quickly noticed I am easily the most prolific suppliant.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hola. I'd love a review on this. If you don't mind, I'd rather it be more of an 'umbrella view' than nitpicks. I usually don't have too many grammar errors, if any. Be as harsh as you want, thanks!
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads." — Dr. Seuss
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. — Mark Twain
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