Young Writers Society

Hey there, would you mind giving a review on this?..it's kind of urgent, so it'd be great if you could review it soon, but no pressure, you could turn it down, of course.

~Shubhi

PS I Hate You (Contest Entry) by Shubhi
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

Who's next?

Me! Me! Me! Rip it to shreds, become the shark!!!!

Salem by Apple

Hi again, Apple! Reviewed as requested Don't hesitate in asking us to review Chapter One

Chapter Two: Salem by Apple
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

Can you please review The Last Day and rip it to shreds? Thanks in advance.

TIGERSPRITE

Woohoo, reviewed within an hour of the request *blows on fingernails and buffs them on my shirt*

The Last Day by TIGERSPRITE
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

Aaaaaaaaanyone else?

Hey, it's me.

Could you be ever so kind and review the first chapter of my novel for me? You've already read the prologue, Jai, so you should understand what's going on. xD

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Thanks a bundle!

Can You See Me? (Chapter One) by Skins
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

Loved the first chapter, Skins!

Who's next?

I would love a review on my script, Freya's Replacement. There are 5 parts up so far, so I understand if you don't want to do a detailed review of the whole piece. Mainly, I'd like an idea of how you feel about it as a whole - if you were watching it on TV, what would your reaction be?

I've already had several excellent reviews, but I have edited the first three parts quite a bit, and added two new sections. I would love to have some of your excellent feedback if you have the time? Be as brutal as you can.

Thanks!
- Nephthys

Hehe, yeah I'm back again. Would you mind reviewing Kiss of Death: Chapter Two for me? I know you haven't read the other chapters, but I assure you, it's not that confusing. I need someone to really rip it to shreds. Thanks in advance.

Hey guys. Sorry about the terribly late replies. I've recently just moved house and then travelled 6 hours up to my home town to visit my family during the university summer break, so I've been a tad busy. Plus it was my mum's birthday yesterday :3

But anyway, here I am to catch up on reviewing!

Tiger, I might be a while on your request depending on how long Nephthys' script is

Cheers,
Jai

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Freya's Replacement by Nephthys
Under review.
Part One
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.
Part Two
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.
Part Three
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.
Part Four
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.
Part Five
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

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Kiss of Death: Chapter Two by Tigersprite
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.

I see that you're awfully busy at the moment, but when you get the time, could you review the second chapter of my novel for me?

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Please and thank you!

Tiger, Nep, yours are done, on to Skins :3

Can You See Me?: Chapter Two by Skins
Under review.
1/1 Necromancers + 0/1 Dragon Ladies have reviewed so far.


Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyone else? Also, Azrael, the other half of the Dynamic Duo, has returned to YWS after furious study, so she's got a whole lot of reviewing ahead. So all of you out there who have only received one review as of yet, rejoice, because your second review will be heading your way soon

- Jai

Anyone want a review? I'm a few reviews behind my quota of two-three reviews a day for this year! Woot for New Year Resolutions!

Hi,
If you will, review my novel The Masquerader. All I really want is chapter five reviewed, but I have tried my best to fix the others based on reviews.
Here's chapter five. viewtopic.php?t=76467
Here's chapter one if you want to review it. viewtopic.php?t=68961