Will you please please read my story? Here's the link to the first part: viewtopic.php?t=55115 And here's to the second part: topic55358.html Thanks buddy.
anybody, yoohoo? :3 I'll even dance...scratch that, I'll sing! horrible scratchy tone: and she wears short skirts and I wear tee shirts, she's cheer captain and I'm on the bleachers...
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
Can you please review a chapter of my story? It's called Demon's Deal, and its Fantasy fiction (Sort of). I only have what's either going to be the first or the second chapter up, since I haven't written the prologue and/or Chapter 1 yet, but I have all the important missing information at the bottom.
You're really quick, Pink ^^ Mind doing a review for me?
If you're looking for a rundown of the beginning, I can't give you one, though -.-" It's a bit complicated, so I hope you can work with what I give you xD
Hey pink, it's me again Thanks so much for your reviews, I've taken on board all that you've said and have went back and re-written my previous chapters. I've also posted up chapter 8. Hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on the improvements that I've made on the other chapters. Thanks so much x
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
Hey. You seem very eager to review. I'm new to this site and have only gotten reviews from one person. Could you help me out? My piece is romantic fiction and is called Making Rain: Molly and Adam. I would GREATLY appreciate it:)
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