Can you review this, please? It's the continuation of the series of short stories I first posted on YWS--The Spirit Boy. I think you reviewed one part, but I don't expect you to remember and it's not necessary to. I just need an epic Pink-style review so that I can work on what needs to be changed. Thanks in advance!
Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
I've been in need of a Punk review for a while now, and now that I've posted a short story, I can request one! I mean, asking you to review my novel would be torture, so I don't. I'm just that nice.
But anywaysssss, would you mind reviewing my rather depressing short story for me? topic79474.html I wrote it last night because that's just what I do at 1:00am.
Hey there =] I wrote this short story, titled Sinews, and I haven't had as many reviews on it as I would like. So if you could read it that would be fantastic =] Thanks! topic79478.html
I was wondering if you might be able to review this for me?
Thanks so much!
Audrey
"I've never told a lie, and that makes me a liar I've never made a bet, but we gamble in desire I've never lit a match with intent to start a fire, But recently the flames are getting out of control"
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