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Sat Oct 30, 2010 1:05 am
Shearwater says...



Edit

CarbonCore-Done!
Roal-Done!
Spike-Done!
Flower~child-Done!
Jenny-Done!
Jash-Done!

Alright, if anyone else needs a review, I'm free. :)
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
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Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:46 pm
iGlamour says...



viewtopic.php?t=71348

Hey, please review this. It's just a short prologue, and I'm new-ish to writing so I'd really appreciate any help and advice that I can get. Thanks!
We did it, we bashed them, wee Potter's the one,
And Voldy's gone moldy, so now let's have fun!

Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
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Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:03 am
carbonCore says...



Hey again Shear!
I'm not sure if I'm allowed to ask for another review so quickly after you reviewed the previous work (and besides, it doesn't happen very often that I post two works in such a small period of time), but could you review The River and the Demon for me? I'm not 100% sure what I think of it yet, and I've come to trust your opinion. :D
Thanks!
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Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:43 am
Apple says...



Could you please review something for me. Pretty please, with an apple on top.

Here is the link.
I spy!
  





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Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:11 pm
Shearwater says...



iGlamour-Done!
CarbonCore-Done!
Apple-Done!

Thank you all for the request. Hope I helped =D
Last edited by Shearwater on Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:12 pm
Sins says...



Yo. 'Sup Punk? 8)

Fancy reviewing this for me please, Punk?

topic71510.html

There's a bucket full of fish heads in it for you. Please and thank you!

Spoiler! :
I'm so calling you Punk form now on.
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:19 am
Shearwater says...



Skins-Done!

Alright, I'm up for another review. =)
Remember, one at a time because of NaNo.
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Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:53 pm
Button says...



Hi there Pink :)
I've actually avoided posted something on here for a while, due to guilt, you giving reviews so nicely and all. :)

BUT, I'm in dire need of a review for something I posted the other day, something I never received any feedback on. :/

So, here it is:

Untitled (maybe Saturday Mornings?)

topic71693.html



THANK YOU SO MUCH.
And I will get you back one. :)


-Coral-
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Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:50 pm
Tigersprite says...



You can review this whenever you have the time because of NaNo: post782578.html#p782578

But if you don't...TIGER NINJAS!

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TIGERSPRITE
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Sun Nov 07, 2010 10:18 pm
Shearwater says...



Persephoneia-Done!
TIGERSPRITE-Done!

Claim your spot before someone else. :3
I only have time to do one review at a time. lol =D
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Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:21 am
Someone says...



I'd be very greatful if you'd review this for me. :D
Link: topic71727.html


Thank you! ^_^
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 3:46 pm
Shearwater says...



Someone-Done!

Alright, free for the next :3
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Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:43 pm
megsug says...



Can you review this for me in General Fiction Novels?
topic71554.html
Thanks
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:40 pm
LadySpark says...



will you please review
my short story Fatal love
and the fire bird: here are the links:
(you might have already reviewed firebird so if you have ignore please)
viewtopic.php?t=71430 < fatal love
novel.php?id=717 < firebird

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I will review in return since I'm low on points
~pointe
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these tornadoes are for you


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Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:44 pm
Shearwater says...



Megsug-Done
Pointe2drama-Done.

Kay, ready for one more.
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
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