Hey Evi, I've seen some of your reveiws and they're fantastic. Would mind reveiwing my revised version of Saved under romantic? It would make me extra happy (:
Hermione, shut your ungodly, lopsided mouth and quit interrupting! 20 points from Gryffindor. You know, for the brightest witch of your age you can sure be a dumba** sometimes. *smiles* 10 points to Dumbledore!
Hey Evi!
Meep here
I was wondering *nervous* if you'll help me out with a short story.
Pretty please with chocolate chip cookies?
Thanks (:
[The link is in my signature. Its called "Seven Letters"]
~Liverpool F.C Supporter~ "You'll never walk alone"
Hey Evi! I'm back for more of your wonderful reviews!
Here is the link:
topic48548.html
Please rip it up. Tear it to pieces. Do whatever you like with it! But please just let me know if it is even remotely interesting to read or if you struggled to get through it. I have a major problem with telling instead of showing.
Thanks so much!!
-Winter
Mamillius: Merry or sad shall’t be? Hermione: As merry as you will. Mamillius: A sad tale’s best for winter. I have one Of sprites and goblins. The Winter's Tale
It's pretty long, but the problem that I noticed myself has something to do with just the beginning. Please help me with that, or if you want to shred all of them, that's even greater!
cheers
Tuna
Picture is worth a thousand words, but it uses up 3000 times the memory.
If you don't mind really long stories...could you take a look at "The End of Time"? I'm not really looking for anything too in depth in chapter one, because I've already gotten quite a few in depth reviews on it, but chapter two is looking incredibly lonely at the moment, so yeah. >_> I would definitely appreciate an in-depth review for that one.
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