Okay... could you please review this for me... there isa prologue, but it doesn't have to be read. Thank you!
Title: S.P. 1.1 / S.P.1.2
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Rating: Zilch
link: Part 1 & Part 2
Thank you immensly!
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Hi there canislupis. I would love a review on my romantic short-story,Love has No boundaries(I). Thanks for the review in advance and can you take a special look on the dialogue and sentence construction because I'm still a bit weak in those areas. ` ~Shubhi
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Hey, Canislupis. I like your reviews. I often find myself reviewing a piece after you and agreeing with almost everything you said. So I'd love to get your thoughts on something of mine. The novel I'm working on right now - you can find the prologue through chapter two in my portfolio - is most important to me (if you critique that you can just do a very general, broad review on all I have so far as a whole), but I also just wrote a short story in Historical Fiction Short Stories that needs reviews. So it's up to you, whichever you want to critique; I'd love your thoughts on either.
Will you review some homework of mine please? I want to get it up to a decent standard because of the fact that it is homework. Right now, it's lacking. It's a monologue and it's pretty short, just in case you wanted to know.
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