Hey man. Could you review my work. I promise it will get happier as times goes on. Give it a chance please. Picking through the Rubble-Part 1 Thanks man.
Hey @fishre! I would love to review your piece, but it's a bit long for me! (50 pages in fact) I have a limited time to review in, and I want to make sure I give you a full and well-thought-out review, so if you could split it into smaller pieces (preferably under 5 thousand words) or find a smaller piece you want me to review, that'd be swell!
“Rise like Lions after slumber
In unvanquishable number.
Shake your chains to earth like dew
Which in sleep had fallen on you—
Ye are many—they are few.” — Mary Shelly
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