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Sun Nov 25, 2018 6:51 pm
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I will review ANYTHING, but if you ask me to review several chapters it will take a while before I can get to you.
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Sat Dec 15, 2018 4:59 pm
manilla says...



good day to you! would you remind reviewing this lyrical piece?

thanks!

Double Meaning/P.J.D.L.M.A
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sat Dec 15, 2018 6:04 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Sure! I'll get right to it!
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 1:43 pm
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:17 pm
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I really want people to use this, so I'm just going to poke it, and maybe someone will notice.
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:27 pm
Liberty says...



Hi!!!

This is such a great thing you are doing! There's this story I kind of want someone to review, cause it's kinda urgent... It has a really simple title too. So if you have any suggestions for it then please let me know.

White Wolfina Hood

I'll be waiting for a review!

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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:28 pm
Liberty says...



Oh, and it's not that long either. Just a short story.
  





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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:42 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



I'll get too it!
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 9:07 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



All done @Liberty500
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:14 pm
manilla says...



The Truth Told

Could you review this for my friend? pleasee be gentle on her!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:19 pm
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Yes absolutely! I'll try not to nitpick. :)
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:30 pm
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Fantascifi66 says...



@manilla You don't need to worry about my nitpicking. There's nothing to nitpick. That piece is absolutely beautiful. I don't even know how I'm going to write constructive criticism on this one. I'll try my best.
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:55 pm
Liberty says...



Hi @manilla!

Can you review my short story? It's called Fairy Diary | Day 6. It's a dramatic fantasy. If you need anymore information, please ask me. :)

Thanks,

Liberty500
  





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Mon Feb 04, 2019 6:45 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Umm... Did you mean for me to review it, or manilla?
@Liberty500
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Mon Feb 04, 2019 1:29 pm
Liberty says...



You! Sorry, I copy pasted, so... it was mean for you AND manilla
  








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