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91 Reviews



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Points: 5550
Reviews: 91
Sat Jan 20, 2018 1:01 am
neptune says...



neptune’s reviews



Welcome to my review thread! I’m neptune, and if you would like a review, please continue by reading the following information!

I will review poetry (any), short stories, articles, and novels. If you request a review on a chapter other than the first, please give me a rundown on what’s happened/what it’s about. I will not review gory/horror genres, nonfiction, erotica, religious pieces, or fanfiction. I’ll accept any other genres. Keep in mind that I have the right to deny any request for any reason.

My reviews are thorough and I always give my honest opinion. That being said, I can sometimes be a little harsh but I do give my true feedback -- that includes some praise! Most of my reviews cover plot development, flow, descriptions, dialogue, characters, word choice and themes -- though it varies. Of course, it always comes with lots of love and effort!

Receiving a review should take no longer than one week. If it does, feel free to PM me and I’ll get to it as soon as possible.

In order to request, simply insert a link to your work, and make sure to add a note on whether or not you want the review to focus on one aspect of the work (flow, characters, etc). If you would like to tell me anything else, you can do that too.

All reviews are free. So, what are you waiting for?
you can request a review here!
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57 Reviews



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Points: 1435
Reviews: 57
Sat Jan 20, 2018 1:19 am
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Saruka says...



writers' block

I don't care what aspect you focus on, I'd just like some constructive criticism!
a lesbian disaster
  





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91 Reviews



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Reviews: 91
Sat Jan 20, 2018 9:22 pm
neptune says...



@Saruka done!
you can request a review here!
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76 Reviews



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Points: 1779
Reviews: 76
Sat Jan 20, 2018 9:33 pm
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KaiRyu says...



Here's one for you! ^-^ All my different ways

I don't really care what you focus on. So feel free to absolutely crush it! :D
“So what? You're another person so of course you look different. What do you need to be ashamed for?” Ciel Phantomhive

"Reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram buy gold bye!" Bill Cipher
  





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91 Reviews



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Points: 5550
Reviews: 91
Sun Jan 21, 2018 10:20 pm
neptune says...



@KaiRyu the review is done!
you can request a review here!
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11 Reviews



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Points: 577
Reviews: 11
Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:45 pm
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Cinderquill says...



Hi! If you don't mind, I'd like you to review Angel Wings and a Small Flame

You can critique it any way you want! I'm just looking for criticism so I can improve as a writer.
  





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91 Reviews



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Points: 5550
Reviews: 91
Tue Jan 23, 2018 6:21 am
neptune says...



@Cinderquill completed!
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94 Reviews



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Reviews: 94
Thu Feb 01, 2018 6:40 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Hullo neptune! I would really appreciate a review on my poem, Not enough. I'm just looking for some general overall feedback if you would please! Thanks! :D
Unofficial Blue Cat of YWS =^-^=

"You can never look at a book the same way once you've read it"

My PM box is always open for anything and everything <3

~Never stop looking up~
  





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91 Reviews



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Points: 5550
Reviews: 91
Sun Feb 11, 2018 4:08 am
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neptune says...



@TheBlueCat I finally finished your request! Apologies for taking so long, thank you for being patient!
you can request a review here!
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5 Reviews



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Points: 49
Reviews: 5
Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:31 pm
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MrsxCreepypasta says...



In The Mind of Suicide

It does not matter to me how you review this, I just like seeing what others think, but not many will give this story a chance due to the subject of suicide
  





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235 Reviews



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Points: 2200
Reviews: 235
Mon Mar 05, 2018 4:36 pm
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inktopus says...



The drip drip dripping of the rain is music unheard by human ears

Review it how you feel best!
insert profound quote here

Formerly Stormcloud
  





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91 Reviews



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Reviews: 91
Mon Apr 02, 2018 11:52 pm
neptune says...



@inktopus your review is finally finished. I'm *so* sorry for how long it took me.

As for @MrsxCreepypasta, I can still do your review if you'd like. It's been so long but I'll try to get it written later this week.

Open for any other requests!
you can request a review here!
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91 Reviews



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Points: 5550
Reviews: 91
Mon Jul 16, 2018 3:55 am
neptune says...



Bumping this!
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107 Reviews



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Points: 99
Reviews: 107
Tue Jan 08, 2019 2:53 am
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manilla says...



Maybe on the flow of the story? Thanks!

5 for Nataliya Arlovskaya - Year 760 (Part 1)
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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91 Reviews



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Reviews: 91
Sat Jan 12, 2019 11:56 pm
neptune says...



@manilla done!
you can request a review here!
Check out Squills!
  








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