Elesium wrote:My writing could use some brutal honesty, it helps me very much.
Here's a link if you'd be willing to review.
In the Eyes of a Demon
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Elesium wrote:My writing could use some brutal honesty, it helps me very much.
Here's a link if you'd be willing to review.
In the Eyes of a Demon
artbyandream wrote:My writing is in need of some brutal honesty! It would really help if you could review this first chapter.
River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries
Desdemona wrote:Hi
I really need someone to review my series. There's two chapters so far so it shouldn't take too long...
How the Marigold Lost its Sun
There's the link to the first one, the second one is on the corner.
Don't hold back, and thanks a lot in advance!
With thanks and love,
Des
ashlingwolf wrote:Hello! I wouldn't call myself the best writer, particularly since I've been absent for a little while. I could use some brutally honest reviewing on the first few chapters (I only have three up, the fourth coming in a couple days) of my story Four- I recently edited and reposted the first and second chapters, so it would be great to get some new feedback. I don't really care which chapter/chapters you review, but if you want to review a later one, please read up to that. If you don't have the time, that's ok. Here they are:
Four- Chapter one
Four- Chapter two
Four- Chapter three
Lord Anziu wrote:Hey Jyva!
Would you kindly shred this to utter pieces?
I have some problems with my writing after getting back on the horse for the first time in 3 years, which I started by editing this old project of mine (also the one that I have somehow fleshed out in my mind)
Gods and Kings: Fury of the Desert- chapter 1- ongoing
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Points: 7
Reviews: 48