Hey there, @jokerman57
Welcome to the YWS! I take it you want what you posted in this thread to be reviewed, and you've come to the right place!
The thing about it, however, is that first you have to properly publish it via the Publishing Center (which can be found at the top of the page), then fill out Alice's form, and post the link to it here!
Publishing something requires points, however, and I see that you have spent all of yours. Do not fret, though! You can get points at any time!
You see, the way YWS works is that everybody wants to have their works read and given feedback for. So, to make sure that people are motivated to review other people's works, they are rewarded with points. The number of points varies, depending on the quality of the review you have written. This way, you get to help someone out, and at the same time gain points to post your own works. I guess you could say that it /works/ out for everyone xD
So, I encourage you, fellow YWSer, write a few reviews to the best of your ability, help a few people out, and then, in turn, receive the points to post your work, then post the link to it here for Alice to review.
Oh, and please fill out the form. That would be fantastic. Have a nice day!
Gender:
Points: 402
Reviews: 107