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Mon Apr 04, 2016 12:38 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



As this is a society for young writers a lot of fiction is left unread due to mature themes. If you want someone to read your violence, smut or horrific tales, I'm here because no one else is.

I will of course review everything and anything due to the above disclaimer. If it's fanfiction, don't expect me to know what's canon and to help you with characterisation. If it's poetry, expect to be offended if I don't understand some subtle symbolism that you added to the last line of the 23rd stanza.

So give me works that you have been hiding from others. Give me tales that you haven't polished to a sheen because you were unsure of the direction. Give me a story that I can tear to satisfactory shreds.

But be aware that I speak my mind. And sometimes that's all you're looking for.
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Mon Apr 04, 2016 1:07 am
Glauke says...



I'd love some feedback on my poem Psychiatric :)

Thanks in advance!
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Mon Apr 04, 2016 3:08 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Done :) Excellent piece. Who's next?
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Mon Apr 04, 2016 12:05 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Sorry, quick question - will you review stuff that hasn't got much 'violence, smut or horrific tales' in it just yet? (If not then it's totally fine)
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Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:42 pm
seeminglymeaningless says...



lol of course. That's just there to let people know I'm willing to review anything ^^
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Mon Apr 04, 2016 6:24 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Oh good :) If it's not too much trouble, could you review this thing? It's not great but I'd like a second opinion?
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Tue Apr 05, 2016 12:35 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



It was great :) Opinion given (ie reviewed thoroughly). Now, who's next?
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Wed Apr 06, 2016 5:25 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review The Beeping Sound! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Thu Apr 07, 2016 12:45 am
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Done! Thanks for requesting a review - sorry I'm not great with poetry!

*waits patiently for next piece to review*
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Thu Apr 07, 2016 1:05 am
Costa says...



If you've a lot of time to spend, I could use some feedback on my ongoing novel, War of Dawn.

Specifically, I'd ask for Chapter 5 and onward but you'll likely need to read it from the start to make sense of it (there's way too much to summarize, unfortunately).

Mind, every single chapter is pretty dang big so I'll understand if you pass on it.

If you're up for it, you can find all chapters in my porfolio.

Cheers!
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2016 5:09 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Done Chapter 1 and will move on to the other chapters as time permits.

Anyone else? :3
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Fri Apr 08, 2016 9:51 pm
InfiniteRectangles says...



Hello, if you don't mind, could you please review my short story for me?
Bang
Thanks in advance! :)
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Sat Apr 09, 2016 4:27 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Solid work, Infinite!

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Sat Apr 09, 2016 5:43 pm
AnarchyWolf says...



Hello. It's me. Again. Sorry.

Could you review my other thing because y'know why not? I'm not sure about how I got the characters' motivations. And your reviews are cool. Thanks.
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