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As this is a society for young writers a lot of fiction is left unread due to mature themes. If you want someone to read your violence, smut or horrific tales, I'm here because no one else is.

I will of course review everything and anything due to the above disclaimer. If it's fanfiction, don't expect me to know what's canon and to help you with characterisation. If it's poetry, expect to be offended if I don't understand some subtle symbolism that you added to the last line of the 23rd stanza.

So give me works that you have been hiding from others. Give me tales that you haven't polished to a sheen because you were unsure of the direction. Give me a story that I can tear to satisfactory shreds.

But be aware that I speak my mind. And sometimes that's all you're looking for.
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I'd love some feedback on my poem Psychiatric :)

Thanks in advance!
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Done :) Excellent piece. Who's next?
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Sorry, quick question - will you review stuff that hasn't got much 'violence, smut or horrific tales' in it just yet? (If not then it's totally fine)
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lol of course. That's just there to let people know I'm willing to review anything ^^
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Oh good :) If it's not too much trouble, could you review this thing? It's not great but I'd like a second opinion?
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It was great :) Opinion given (ie reviewed thoroughly). Now, who's next?
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Please review The Beeping Sound! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Done! Thanks for requesting a review - sorry I'm not great with poetry!

*waits patiently for next piece to review*
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If you've a lot of time to spend, I could use some feedback on my ongoing novel, War of Dawn.

Specifically, I'd ask for Chapter 5 and onward but you'll likely need to read it from the start to make sense of it (there's way too much to summarize, unfortunately).

Mind, every single chapter is pretty dang big so I'll understand if you pass on it.

If you're up for it, you can find all chapters in my porfolio.

Cheers!




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Done Chapter 1 and will move on to the other chapters as time permits.

Anyone else? :3
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Hello, if you don't mind, could you please review my short story for me?
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Thanks in advance! :)
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Solid work, Infinite!

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Hello. It's me. Again. Sorry.

Could you review my other thing because y'know why not? I'm not sure about how I got the characters' motivations. And your reviews are cool. Thanks.
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