Young Writers Society

Could you review my short story, The Blockbuster Writer - Part 1

It is an adaptation of my poem,

The Blockbuster Writer. Thanks!

Just wondering if you could rewiev this for me...

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=127960

I hope you two @DrFeelGood and @cakerissa found my review helpful to you. If you'd like another one then please post it below.

Hello KeepWriting!

I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel False Gods. It's a YA/ Sci-Fi about a hacker who bites off a little more than she can chew!

False Gods - Sunday Bloody Sunday (Chapter 1)

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

I hope you found my review helpful @NerdBird. If you'd like another review then please post link below.

Hi there!

I was hoping you could review my novel chapters for me? I'm looking for reviews on my chapters 3 and 4, but it definitely helps if you read the previous chapters, for background info and such. Here are the links for chapters 3 and 4, prior chapters can also be accessed from there as well:

Chapter 3, The Name Game
Chapter 4.1, The Name Game
Chapter 4.2, The Name Game

I'm also looking for someone to regularly review my chapters as I put them up, so if my story at all interests you and you're willing, I would love for you to do that! If not I totally understand

Thanks in advance!

Hey, Keepwriting. I'd kind of like a second opinion on my thingy https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/AnarchyWolf/The-Winged--01-Delivery-Boy-Nik-New-127488 here if it's not too much trouble. Thanks

Hello! You have an admirer. It'd be great if you could review these two chapters (hopefully they're short enough--I've been told I can be a bit of a wordcount slayer).

Divine Intervention: Chapter One

Divine Intervention: Chapter Two

AnarchyWolf wrote:Hey, Keepwriting. I'd kind of like a second opinion on my thingy https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/AnarchyWolf/The-Winged--01-Delivery-Boy-Nik-New-127488 here if it's not too much trouble. Thanks

I hope my review was helpful please feel free to ask for another one any time you like.

Ellstar wrote:Hello! You have an admirer. It'd be great if you could review these two chapters (hopefully they're short enough--I've been told I can be a bit of a wordcount slayer).

Divine Intervention: Chapter One

Divine Intervention: Chapter Two

I hope you found my reviews helpful! Feel free to ask for more.

Hello, I would greatly appreciate it if you could review my poem for me! If Every Creature Ceased to Know Their Worth

Thanks in advance!

Hello, could you please review:

Starlight: Prologue

and

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

Thanks in advance!

Hello! do you think I could get a review on the prologue of a story I am thinking about making? c:

Its an adventure/fantasy/medieval combination.

Elysium - Prologue

There you go, @InfiniteRectangles, @yizhongt, @Elesium, and @BlackhawkUnder! I hope my reviews were helpful to you all. Feel free to ask for some more in the future. Just remember not to bombard me with more than one at a time! Stay great!

Hey keepwriting, would really like your feedback again.

Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)

Thanks in advance!