Hi there! I was wondering if you would be so kind as to review either chapter 3 or 4 of my novel The Unsinkable Disaster? I know you probably haven't read the other chapters but I'm just starting it up after a bit of a break and need a little help with getting some reviews
Thank you!
“You know a conjurer gets no credit when once he has explained his trick, and if I show you too much of my method of working, you will come to the conclusion that I am a very ordinary individual after all.”
Hi, could you review my latest chapter of Forgotten Fire? You don't have to read the chapters before it, though it might help you understand a bit more.
@Sagitta Absolutely! I should hopefully have it done within the next 24 hours, but there's a chance my power may go out because of heavy storms. If that were to happen, my Internet would go out as well. Hopefully that won't happen though! Hope you have a great morning/evening/day/night/time, haha.
Too much blood had flown from the wrist Of children shamed for those they choose to kiss
I uploaded a few more chapters of Heartbeat Academy, eight and nine. I liked reading your other reviews so if you get a chance, I'd love your opinions on the next parts x_x
Hi ParanormalMyth, Felistia here. I would love if you could review the novel I am writing. I have 8 chapters up, so I'll give you the link to the first part. It is a fantasy novel about dragons. I will leave more description and the link below.
Spoiler! :
The story is about a dragon named Zoltar and he is on a mission to save his tribe. I don't want to give away to much.
I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway. — Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)
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