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Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm

ExOmelas says...

Hi all, please could you review the latest chapter of my sci-fi series Monkey Boy's Adventures in Space?

Monkey Boy's Adventures In Space - 2.2

Happy to provide a synopsis of the story so far if necessary.

Cheers, Biscuits

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream

Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.
Linkin Park
One More Light

I'm bigger than a hexidecimal...

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Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm

penfeme says...

I would greatly appreciate a review for my poem "all that I am is starlight, dim" - thanks!

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Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am

JuliasSneezer says...

Hi, everyone!

I would really appreciate it if someone could please review the first chapter of my novel in progress:

The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

Thank you to anyone who reviews! Anyone who reviews, I promise to review something of theirs! Many thanks,

-Cupcakes :smt023

"When in doubt, improvise!"
-Winny the woodpecker

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Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am

Kazeybear says...

I would love a review on my poem at; Pain

Thank you very much!

~Kazey

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm

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MemeQueen says...

If it's not too much trouble, could I have a review on my first chapter? Thank you alll.

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Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am

Redbox275 says...

I would like someone to review my short story

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories[url][/url]

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Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm

MayaM says...

If someone could review my short story called: Alone with my Thoughts that would be incredible! Thanks!

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Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm

emoglobiin says...

I'm a new one here and could use some advise on my writing. I'd appreciate it if you read my short story "The A Team".

link: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/emoglobiin/The-A-Team-130875

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Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm

Kazeybear says...

i would love a review on my most recent poem, Only Time Will Tell

We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury

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Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am

Ejay1806 says...

I am looking for reviews for my poem Friend and Money:A Mystery

Ejay

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Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm

restlessheart14 says...

Hey all! I would like to request a review on my piece called night and day. It is a short poem that highlights romanticism and sound devices. Thanks

Night and Day

Restlessheart

"Each day means a new 24 hours. Each day means everything's possible again. You live in the moment, you die in the moment, you take it all one day at a time."

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Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am

Vellichor says...

If anyone had some free time, I would very much appreciate any feedback on my poem, The Power of Words. I'm new to poetry, so don't expect much xD Thank you all!

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Thu Sep 15, 2016 12:57 am

Chappiez says...

Would someone please review my story, Jolted?

Jolted

Thanks!

I want money to make art, not make art to make money.

We live in a beautiful world
Yeah we do
Yeah we do

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Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:45 am

TheOneNamedZoe says...

Please review my three works!

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Sat Oct 01, 2016 7:48 pm

KaityKakes2889 says...

If you have time, I would appreciate it.....

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Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
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