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Tue Oct 08, 2019 2:12 am
Corryn says...



Hi everyone!I am new here, and I am looking for some feedback for my first writing. Here is the link to my short story titled, "I wanted my life back".
​I wanted my life back

Thank you so much!
  





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Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:27 pm
EverLight says...



I'd like my work The Fire Requiem, Chapter 1 Blood & Scars reviewed.
Proud Slytherin, Proud RavenClaw
  





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Tue Dec 03, 2019 10:17 pm
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Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:51 pm
BlackThorne says...



I'd like some feedback for my short story.
~My Works~
A Novel for NanoWrimo about the spread of a deadly plague
A Short Story with a creepy christmas tree
some random Poems
  





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Fri Feb 07, 2020 5:17 pm
Glauke says...



Hi, I'd really appreciate some feedback on my most recent poem, Aquatic Flight. It's a short-ish poem about a dream I had.

Thanks in advance!
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Sat Feb 15, 2020 11:43 am
IamI says...



I was wondering if someone could review my work ‘fairy tales: 1-3’.

Edit: my work is now out of the green room, so please review other peoples works that need it more before mine, but if this sounds like something interesting to anyone please feel free to review. the more the merrier.
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Tue Feb 25, 2020 5:12 pm
Tawsif says...



I need reviews for my 'Love Part 4', which I have posted in the Short Story Section of the website. Please help me out.
  





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Sun Mar 01, 2020 8:42 am
ChrisDixon says...



Hi. Looking of someone to review my poems:
The tiles are: Death, cup of tea
Thank you
  





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Thu Mar 05, 2020 6:14 pm
IamI says...



I was wondering if someone could review my work, 'for poems about time'.

thanks.

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Four poems about time

Edit: it now has two reviews, but if this sounds like something that may interest you, feel free to review.

Edit edit: while it is now out of the green room, I would very much appreciate mire in depth reviews, as the two I have received on it are not particularly helpful.
Aren't we all just rubber oranges bouncing down the great roller-coaster of life?
  





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Thu Mar 19, 2020 3:47 pm
Leviari says...



Hi :)
It's been a very long time since the last time I published a poem, I'm super insecure about it so I'm in desperate need for honest feedback.

Here's the poem

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Leviari/Les-Feurs-Du-Mal-146777

thank you to anyone who might help me out :)
  








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