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Tue Oct 08, 2019 2:12 am
Corryn says...

Hi everyone!I am new here, and I am looking for some feedback for my first writing. Here is the link to my short story titled, "I wanted my life back".
​I wanted my life back

Thank you so much!

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Sun Oct 27, 2019 5:27 pm
EverLight says...

I'd like my work The Fire Requiem, Chapter 1 Blood & Scars reviewed.
Sovereign Queen Of The Universe

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Tue Dec 03, 2019 10:17 pm
LZPianoGirl says...

Last edited by LZPianoGirl on Fri Feb 07, 2020 6:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.
My Sims Blog:

I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.
— Holden Caulfield

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Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:51 pm
BlackThorne says...

I'd like some feedback for my short story.
~My Works~
A Novel for NanoWrimo about the spread of a deadly plague
A Short Story with a creepy christmas tree
some random Poems

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Fri Feb 07, 2020 5:17 pm
Glauke says...

Hi, I'd really appreciate some feedback on my most recent poem, Aquatic Flight. It's a short-ish poem about a dream I had.

Thanks in advance!

be still, sad heart, and cease repining
behind the clouds is the sun still shining

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Sat Feb 15, 2020 11:43 am
IamI says...

I was wondering if someone could review my work ‘fairy tales: 1-3’.

Edit: my work is now out of the green room, so please review other peoples works that need it more before mine, but if this sounds like something interesting to anyone please feel free to review. the more the merrier.

If you want something badly, you just gotta believe it's gonna work out.
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