Hi everyone!I am new here, and I am looking for some feedback for my first writing. Here is the link to my short story titled, "I wanted my life back". I wanted my life back
I was wondering if someone could review my work ‘fairy tales: 1-3’.
Edit: my work is now out of the green room, so please review other peoples works that need it more before mine, but if this sounds like something interesting to anyone please feel free to review. the more the merrier.
Edit: it now has two reviews, but if this sounds like something that may interest you, feel free to review.
Edit edit: while it is now out of the green room, I would very much appreciate mire in depth reviews, as the two I have received on it are not particularly helpful.
Hello, asking here because I need a review asap (since like, the story needs to be done in a week or so). My first time writing here in almost 2 years, so yeah. Really hoping for good and honest advice, much appreciated. Here is the link to the short story: This is my world. For now and forever.
The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own. — Rod Serling, Twilight Zone
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