Spoiler! :
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Prologue-124445
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Also, my rule of thumb is that I never start in the middle of a novel and just review one stand-apart chapter.
-yours has 8 reviews. Sorry.Also I won't review something if it has 5 or more good quality reviews. Don't want to repeat other points.
Gender:
Points: 7146
Reviews: 524