Young Writers Society

Shubhi, Pointe: Done!

I'm so happy I'm actually posting on this, for once!

You're finally free! *Dances like a madman on sugar lumps*

Well, you probably have loads of PM requests, but hey, you're free according to this. Anyways, I would love to be graced by your awesomeness, sister in-law. Could you check out my latest instalment of Stop and Stare?

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As you can see, I've already got a billion reviews, but it just feels empty without you... You would complete it. Besides, I've edited it quite a bit since my last review, so some fresh opinions would be nice.

Please and thank you!

Skinsy, done! Thanks for the request!

If you could
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Hope the length won't deter you

Your " I died tonight" poem was quite good. It was one of those stories that you think you know what is going to happen, but you reall don't... I didn't expect it to be a computer. Anyway, Will you please reveiw my story? It is a romantic novel... I am a novice... the story is kind of cliche...etc. So anyway, I am in need of advice... and a reveiw. Will you do me the honors?
Thnx... Cassidy Rose

Take A Peace
Of My Heart
And be Happy

Cloud, Cassi : done!

ch. 6 of THe Magi is out. Please review!
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Wow! Your I ddied tonoght poem was good. I would love for you to review my poem and tell me what you think.

MOMMA!
I am done with the third chapter of Know I'm Here and here's the link-Know I'm Here(3)

Please and thank you!

Hey there! I heard that you're a brilliant reviewer, so can you please review this for me? It's my first time ever writing a love story, and I'd love it if you could help me shred it to pieces. The ending's kind of predictable right now, I guess.

Pointe, Lana, Shubhi and Iceprincess: Done!

Thanks for the requests!

Hi!
I was wondering if you could review my story, topic74886.html
It's for school so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you so much!

~Little Princess

'ello Mother Dear! will you please review my new novel? I need the harshest you can give me!
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*snugs*
Pointe

LittlePrincess, Pointe: done!

hi Mommmy,
new novel (how many times have I said that?) anyway its called Snow and is a twist of the classic snow white

this is a link to chapter 2, which I need reviews on, but I suggest you read chapter 1 first.

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thanks and please
~pointe