Young Writers Society

All LiteraryBooks Clubs Forums Green Room Poetry Shorts Roleplays

1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6

The Review Bin

Gender:

Points: 12611
Reviews: 321

Sat Apr 09, 2011 1:20 am

Flower~Child says...

Hello dear, do you mind reviewing a chapter of my story? topic78716.html

My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

Gender:

Points: 14918
Reviews: 384

Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:09 pm

View Likes

eldEr says...

Done :3

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

Gender:

Points: 1040
Reviews: 2

Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:22 pm

Jesiica says...

Hello, could you please review my short story? topic79089.html

The alternative version is Here: post845697.html#p845697

Thank you

Gender:

Points: 14918
Reviews: 384

Sun Apr 10, 2011 7:38 pm

eldEr says...

Both are finished! ^^

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

Gender:

Points: 1484
Reviews: 7

Sun Apr 10, 2011 7:55 pm

Cthulhu says...

Can you please review my short story?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic78003.html

Gender:

Points: 14918
Reviews: 384

Sun Apr 10, 2011 8:22 pm

eldEr says...

All done!

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

Gender:

Points: 1484
Reviews: 7

Sun Apr 10, 2011 8:37 pm

Cthulhu says...

Thank you

Gender:

Points: 3888
Reviews: 763

Mon Apr 11, 2011 2:22 am

Lava says...

Ishy love!

Can you look at my poem? It's one that I've worked on for some time and I'd like to increase my poetry skillz! 8D
Here : Nostalgia

~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

Gender:

Points: 27927
Reviews: 532

Mon Apr 11, 2011 5:33 pm

ArcticMonkey says...

post846252.html

Please and thank you x3

Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.

Gender:

Points: 7340
Reviews: 205

Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:09 pm

Kagi says...

You asked for it.
Declaring your winningness like that. Gah...

Here,
It may be horrible but that's what you're for right?
I'm dumping all of this on you Isha Psha..

BIG SMILE!

Got YWS?

If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong.

Gender:

Points: 4870
Reviews: 145

Mon Apr 11, 2011 9:23 pm

Matthews says...

novel.php?id=1228
Please review? The chapters are very short and easy to review!!!

Thanks so awesomely much!

Have I not commanded thee? Be strong and of good courage; be not afraid, neither be thou dismayed, for the lord thy God is with thee whithersoever thou goest.