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Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:00 am
spike71294 says...



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It's the first chapter of my novel- Wings and Fins.
It's fantasy. :)
Please check it out.
  





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Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:41 am
Jashael says...



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Sat Nov 06, 2010 7:49 am
Yuriiko says...



Done! *sighs*

Yay! Anyone else? :3
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Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:42 pm
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Review this! *Chucks thread at Yuri* Thankyou. :lol:
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Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:32 pm
StoryWeaver13 says...



OK, I'm no good at computer-type stuff so I have no idea how to set a link, but do you think you could take a look at the first chapter to my novel "A Tomboy's Life?" It's under general fiction, and if you could take the time to read it that'd be awesome (I'll totally return the favor).
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:56 am
Yuriiko says...



Done at last! Anyone else? :3
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Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:42 pm
Roadnevertravelled says...



Oh! me me me!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic71891.html

I'll give you one entire point if you do!
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Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:15 pm
Sins says...



Why hello there, Yurii... Fancy seeing you here. :smt001

Would you be ever so kind and review the first chapter of my new fantasy novel for me? It needs quite a bit of help... I wrote it at 3am, so yeah...

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Please and thank you!
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Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:08 am
Yuriiko says...



Done all!
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Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:23 am
Sins says...



It's me again! Yes, I'm stalking you. :smt001

Would you mind reviewing the first chapter of my novel for me, Yurii? I'm not too keen on it, so I would really appreciate some of your advice!

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Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:44 am
Yuriiko says...



Done at last! :D
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Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:28 am
Tigersprite says...



Hey Yurii, it's lowercase Tiger here to request. You've read the Prologue and Chapter One, so if you don't mind could you review Kiss of Death: Chapter Two (Part 1. The Part 1 part is because the whole chapter is around 17,000 words, and so I'm posting half now and half later. Thanks in advance! :D
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Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:12 pm
LadySpark says...



Hi Yurii! could you please review my poem Mask? viewtopic.php?t=70962
thanks,
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these tornadoes are for you


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Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:18 pm
SilentRain says...



Hello!

This is a poem
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Thanks,

~Rain~
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Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Wed Dec 08, 2010 7:01 am
Yuriiko says...



DONE!

Sorry for the late reviews. :3
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