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@herbalhour — sure I can look over it and leave some thoughts!

Hello Hello, I do not know how active this thread is, but I was wondering If I could get some feedback I would appreciate it. Just as a warning, it does have some strong language. Thank you.

Name of the piece: Ophelia Is Choking.

Link: Ophelia Is Choking.

Concerns; I am trying to get it published in a magazine so anything you think could boost or up the quality would be a big help!

I do hope this, is not a big ask. Thank you once again for taking the time to read this.

Hi, Key. I'm requesting another review because I love your reviews. I started a novel and have been posting first drafts on YWS to help with the revision process. It would be great if you could check out the most recent chapter I have posted. (dw it's only chapter 4) Also, I would totally understand if you don't want to go through all the other chapters just to look at chapter four. If that's the case, I can give you a small summary of the previous chapters if you so choose. (but I might also ask you for reviews on later chapters if you're willing :eyes:)
Here's chapter 1
and here's chapter 4

Hi @Moonlily ! Apologies for not getting to review your poem yet — are you still wanting feedback? ^^

@avianwings47 Hi ! Give me a tag if I haven’t gotten to your first chapter in a week or two — I’m happy to give a review but I am pretty busy currently xD so please don’t mind a brief wait!

Hey! Since It I am trying to get published I had to take it down just to follow the guidelines but if it's okay, I could link to my novel's prologue.

it's a paranormal fantasy/romance and is hopefully not that long of a read.

Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.

thank you for understanding.

keystrings wrote:Hey @TheRebel2007 ! This sounds cool -- I'll start with chapter one this week. ^^

Hey, Key, remember me? Guess what? I just dropped a new chapter of Nine a few days back. Would you like to review it along with the other ones? Thanks in advance! :p

Hey, @keystrings! I have a story in my portfolio on my profile that I'd like some feedback on, if you're still open for reviews and not too swamped with requests and whatnot. The story is posted in chapters/chapter parts and titled To Paxaria. There are only like three chapters posted, and like four posts total. If you have time to get to even just one of those, I'd appreciate it!

Hey @WinnyWriter -- thanks for requesting a review!

I'm happy to check out some of your stuff. It might be a few days until I get to all of the current chapters!

@keystrings - no worries!

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