Does anyone have any tips for creating suspense in a story..?
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Gahks wrote:Nate,
I don't think "The bike was wobbly" is an active verb; isn't it stative? The sentence is telling, not showing. Perhaps "The bike wobbled as if in distress" would be more appropriate?
I hate to pick up the Eternal Master but yeah, could someone clear this up?
Gahks
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