Young Writers Society

Wow I have nothing but praise for this, but I'm speechless so.
When you look up "phenomenal," in the dictionary, the definition is this poem.
I loved this, plain and simple. And I'd write that in all caps because that's how I normally express my excitement, but I think writing it in all caps diminishes its significance rather than enhancing it. Kind of like love in Donne's A Valediction Forbidding Mourning.
So basically, what I'm trying to say, is that I loved this more than caps can say.
Ten stars of ten, my dear. Ten of ten. Stupendously phenomenal.

Hello, Isha! Laure here as requested! Wow, this is a really unique poem about nature, I just love nature so much and I love the way you've described the earth and how it relates back to our MC.

but mostly, the earth built her.

because she'd put it away.
she wondered if it'd tingle her belly, this time.

Wow this was wonderful ^_^ not a particularly upbeat or depressing poem but still so wonderful it made me a little happier. In my min I picture a giant wandering the cosmos just consuming the Earth. But when I think about it, I believe there is an underlying message here that could be taken many different ways. Perhaps you are alluding to how people can change the world no matter who they are or the fact that the world was built by people but really the world shaped the people in the process. Really it could be many things. I am normally really on people for grammar, punctuation, rhythm, and flow but....honestly though I know it isn't strictly written in a perfect fashion, it is truly beautiful and not at all choppy. I feel like the unique way you chose to divide it and phrase it really added to the memory and effect of your writing which made it all the more an enjoyable read!

Thanks, Kat

Wow absolutely beautifully written!!